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Arin Christmas Special Chapter 1

Arin Christmas Special Chapter 1

by Ali
in Colorado

Once upon a time, Arin was at the mall waiting in line to see Santa!! Pretty much everybody Arin knows is in line, including the awful Sarah. "Hey Hillary, what are you gonna ask Santa for?" Arin asked her best friend Hillary Tappery. "I don't know, I was hoping for a puppy. Or at least a new sweater. My mom says if I don't want coal, I must ask for at least 1 peice of clothing." Hillary answered. "Weird, my mom says all toys except a pair of shoes. I always want green ones. Like I always say when I want a color 'I always want forest green because that is my favorite color.'" Arin said while moving up in the line. There was only 5 people left and Arin was the next one in line after Anna. When Arin climbed up onto Santa's lap, he said, "Ooomfff. Getting to be a big girl aren't you?" Santa said with a 'Ho Ho Ho." "Yea, I am 6 years old and I am turning 7 in 6 months." Arin said joyfully. "Ok, so I want a new laptop game, a new growing puppy for my collection, a new pair of forest green shoes, a new Suvivor Island toy and game, a new book about Christmas, a new notebook a new...." Arin listed before Sarah interrupted. "Oh quiet you stupid girl!!! Your just gonna get coal so why bother with your dumb wishes if they never come true anyways!!!!" Sarah and her friends all laughed. "Well, you seem to be a spoiled brat to me. Getting everything you want by yelled and hitting. I might send you coal from the oldest Christmas train I can find.The already burned coal, the coal from the oldest reindeer that doesn't seem to poop out chocolate and everything thats worst and beyond. Your the one whos getting coal, not this sweet little girl here." Santa said to Sarah. Sarah pushed Santa and Arin off Santa's throne and Sarah sat in it. "I am giving everybody coal except me!!! If you want a new ball and bat, well I am gonna get it and burn it!!! I might as well use the coal for you so you don't get anything! HAHAHA!!!" Sarah laughed with her friends beside her. The police took them away to their parents. "Well that was the worst thing Sarah could have done." Arin said to Santa. Santa and everybody else just stared at Sarah and her friends with a mad face.


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why is there a christmas

why is there a christmas special in summer.......??

Posted by Danielle on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 19:17
Well I don't see anybody

Well I don't see anybody else making any seasonal books in Summer, so at least I got something.

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 19:38
AND AND AND at least I got

AND AND AND at least I got Arin readers. I don't see yu making any Arin books. What now? You gonna make one better than mine!?!?! (Here I go with that topic again!!!!)

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 19:39
Uh, dudette, calm down.

Uh, dudette, calm down. Danielle just thought it was a bit out of season.

 

My mind + a sharpie marker. What's the worst thing that could happen?

Posted by Bree! on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 19:48
i dont WANT to make arin

i dont WANT to make arin books..and yes i could

Posted by Danielle on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 19:52
Let's do this in third

Let's do this in third person.
WolfWriter jumped to her feet and it was all she could do to contain her boiling emotions. "That was hardly necissery, Alison," she said as coolly as possible. But there was still a cold edge to her voice. Speaking seemed to unnerve her, making her more nervous that she would lash out and ignite another fight. The Arin books seemed to be like kindling in the fire lately, just waiting for the spark Wolf was tryng hard not to set off. She went to stand next to Danielle, head lowered as she tried not to glare at Alison. But the look in he. Eyes was far from warm and friendly. It wasn't exactly hostile, yet it lacked a neutral feeling to it. Wolf tipped her head to one side as she tried dissect Alison's words and uncertain motivations, combining that with the cocky waves of emotions that drifted off of Alison.
"I was about to comment on how this is the best Arin story yet. But then I saw the exchange that just occured between Danielle and yourself," she growled. "Of course, I'm not so shallow as to judge your writing by your personality, so my opinion on this being one of your best works remains unchanged."
Never before had Wolf felt so enfuriated, but she fought to control her emotions. Recalling what Alison had said, the bit about not being able to write like that. She couldn't help but take it personally; that was the part that had really set her off. Wolf was beside herself with anger and frustration, but with one last low snarling sound, like the human equivelent of a dog's growl, she managed to relax her position, ready for whatever happened next. She examined Alison's expression, then shot her a knowing smile. There! Let them figure out what that means!

*{I keep trying to kidnap Jasper, but every time, Alice is at the window with a baseball bat, waiting for me. How does she kn--ohh, right.}*

Posted by WolfWriter on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:01
Why don't you turn that into

Why don't you turn that into a "New York Times Best Seller" why don't ya?!!?! Make everybody laugh or boo at me or yell. Why don't you shout that out to the world!!!I am sick and tired of these little lessons. I just want to do what I want!! You guys do!!! I am not your slave to perfect books!!!

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:11
Wolf grinned slightly, but

Wolf grinned slightly, but just so much that the corners of her mouth twitched.
"Relax, Alison," she said slowly, ennunciating each word. Her fury didn't flare up at all, much to her surprise. If any, this comment should've unnerved her most, since it ha been directed at her. But that was not the case, prehaps because she had already vented much of her emotions.
"Want do you mean 'turn it into a bestseller'?" Wolf asked tentatively. This could easily turn into a bloodbath, though not in the lteral sense, but now it was personal. If she got more than a couple of nasty comments from Alison, she might not be able to turn back. Each time she would Ty, Wolf had enough foresight to imagine not being able to resist the urge to check back for a reply, then being dragged back in. She looked at Alison, then glanced around at the others who had joined the confrontation. This was going downhill fast but there was too much momentum to stop. It was all anyone could do to slow it down. Wolf's eyes drifted expectantly back to Alison.

*{I keep trying to kidnap Jasper, but every time, Alice is at the window with a baseball bat, waiting for me. How does she kn--ohh, right.}*

Posted by WolfWriter on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:32
Stop it! I don't even know

Stop it! I don't even know why you want to be on KP! All of us (mostly) want to have a new york times best seller. I give up. Don't expect any 'perfect' comments on your Arin stories. *walks away.*

On a Papa John's order form: Unlimited toppings on any Large Pizza (max 7 toppings)

If you like tacos, clap your hands! I love tacos, I clap my hands!!! (hi Lucky!!!) My signatures are about food. Why? Because I'm hungry!!!!

Posted by Leia on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 08:17
Then why don't I quit?????

Then why don't I quit????? My grandmother waisted 12.95 on this thinjg and now your saying, all because I don't want CC I should just leave. I wanted Arin books on KP because I wanted everybody to know she exsisted in books! All your saying is for me to stop writing them when everybody wants them!!!!!!!!!

Posted by Alison on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:37
We read your Arin books to

We read your Arin books to see if they've gotten any better.

On a Papa John's order form: Unlimited toppings on any Large Pizza (max 7 toppings)

If you like tacos, clap your hands! I love tacos, I clap my hands!!! (hi Lucky!!!) My signatures are about food. Why? Because I'm hungry!!!!

Posted by Leia on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 08:18
Because we aren't copy cats,

Because we aren't copy cats, thats why we're not making Arins.

If you're 6 1/2 and you believe in Santa, you've got problems.

Just saying.

 

*L*I*L*Y*0*9*

Posted by Lily09 on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:09
I'm 11! I turn 12 next month

I'm 11! I turn 12 next month on the 16th.

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:11
No, I'm talkin bout Arin.

No, I'm talkin bout Arin. She's 6 and a half.

 

*L*I*L*Y*0*9*

Posted by *L*I*L*Y*0*9* on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:13
When you say Arin has

When you say Arin has problems, you say I have problems. When I first started Arin, I based her on me, only with a cat, dog, and a sister. I have 2 brothers, no cats and no sisters and 2 dogs. Whenever I write Arin books, I feel free to do anything my way in them. I never want them to change. If you guys can just leave me alone about it being out of season, no paragraphs or or it being too short, that will make me feel free instead of being trapped. I work a lot to make these Arin books. One time, on a 1 subject notebook, it took me 12 hours to figure it out. I wrote that sitting on the same couch for 12 hours, I wanted to put it here on Kidpub, but the way you guys tell me to change thhem, I worked 12 hours for nothing.

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:18
i turn twelve this month on

i turn twelve this month on the 16th...weird..

Posted by Danielle on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:13
oay in mot gonna pretend and

oay in mot gonna pretend and im gonna tell the truth here: arin sucks. this "arin college" is retarded. Its just not good. - there now everybodys gonna yell at me but thats the truth.  i dont care

Posted by Danielle on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:17
arin work forms and colleges

arin work forms and colleges are cliche... and arin is... unrealistic... that's the truth.

And i just don't care anymore to capitalize the A in arin.

 

*L*I*L*Y*0*9*

Posted by Lily09 on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:21
Everything isn't what you

Everything isn't what you want. Maybe I wanted to do it!!! I thought this stuff was over, but it just begun!!! I make unrealistic books, but not all books are realistic!! Some books ahve magic wands or dragons, only thing your gonna get close to that is a deck of cards, a hankie, and a komono dragon. I AM NOT CHANGING ANYTHING SO SHUT UP!!! I thought we were over and friends, but I thought wrong. I am sure you made a few books that were unrealistic before so shut up on it about me!!!! Not everything spins around world Lily09 or or anybody else!! So just shut your mouth about it. Yea, I don't care if I am mean right now. I am just gonna get it out of my head.

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:36
"It's onething if you try to

"It's onething if you try to be realistic but fail and completely another if you Mose it unrealstic...it's called fantasy," Wolf replied with a nonchalant shrug. She raise one eybrow, eyeing Alison cautiously. "You never answered my question. The one about a best-seller."
Then Wolf thought of something andgrinned. This was her chance to make t or break it, to stop the fight or continue it further. But being one whole was willing to take risks, she dove in. "Go ahead, Alison," she invited, holding he arms out like an open target, "Fire away. Vent everything on your mind to me. I can take it." A small smile danced across Wolf's face, lighting up her features. She was prepared for anythig, knowing he anger had evaporated almost completely.

*{I keep trying to kidnap Jasper, but every time, Alice is at the window with a baseball bat, waiting for me. How does she kn--ohh, right.}*

Posted by WolfWriter on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:47
Alison looked straight into

Alison looked straight into Wolf's eyes and said, "Maybe you should get on with the rest of your life instead of reading these posts. Wolf said ok and blah blah blah and its the end of that dumb story.

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:56
The Arin College was just a

The Arin College was just a way to... it was just to.. look, it is not retarded. The Arin College is for future writers to know what I do to make Arin if they really like her books. I don't care what you think, say or do. I can do anything I want. Arin College is to teach everybody who loves Arin 110% all day or all night, Arin College is for them to know about Arin and her history and other things.

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:25
How many people joined (on

How many people joined (on KP?)

*L*I*L*Y*0*9*

Posted by *L*I*L*Y*0*9* on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:27
Nobody yet, thats because

Nobody yet, thats because nobody knows what its about! I might do a chapter book (Sorry, love chapter books) on what you can do or learn to do or even teach. But before you can teach, you have to start at Arin Preschool, or if you know so much that you want the college, than go ahead and enroll in it!!!

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:29
To be fair, I also have an

To be fair, I also have an Arin Preschool to teach the easiest basics of Arin, and Kindergarten to teach a little harder classes of Arin, and I have all the grades from Arin Pre-K to Arin College!!! I even have Arin Writing to let people write Arin books on Kidpub to see if they can do it in real life or... or... or just to have fun and let their ideas out in Arin's world.

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:27
how many people joinedd..?

how many people joinedd..?

Posted by Danielle on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:29
Read what I just wrote.

Read what I just wrote.

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:30
i did

i did

Posted by Danielle on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 20:32
And I think that lets you

And I think that lets you know what most people think of Arin.

 

My mind + a sharpie marker. What's the worst thing that could happen?

Posted by Bree! on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 21:07
Yea rude and selfish

Yea rude and selfish peoeple. Wanting my books to be like yours or being realistic like instead of Arin, I replace her with Lindsay Lohan who got out of rehab a fewweeks ago. You want Arin replaced with a drug addictive?!?!

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 21:16
My Third Person: Lily09's

My Third Person:

Lily09's mind flash with things. Some things that might represent her as rude and selfish. Like Alison said. But she wasn't.

"That's what my BFF told me Alison. She said that the world didn't revolve around me. But she didn't realize that in fact, it wasn't revolving around me. It was revolving around her. Or that's what she was trying to make it happen. But in this case, you're not my best friend." Lily09 said. Lily gathered her things and walked away.

 

*L*I*L*Y*0*9*

Posted by *L*I*L*Y*0*9* on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 21:23
Well, in real life, I am

Well, in real life, I am accually pretty nice!! If nobody put that un realistic thing up, I would be writing a new story.

Posted by Alison on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 22:04
If the comment three above

If the comment three above is aimed at me, I admit I can be really rude, but I don't think my above comments were. And I really don't think I'm that selfish. And I'm a fantasy writer, so I try to make my books "un realistic". And I don't want other people's books to be like mine, or mine to be like other people's. That would make my writing unorigional. Ew.

 

My mind + a sharpie marker. What's the worst thing that could happen?

Posted by Bree on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 22:23
Hitting the caps. ALISON!!!

Hitting the caps.

ALISON!!! YOU ARE GETTING ME REALLLY ANGREY.

1. YOU ALWAYS SAY 'READ ARIN!!!!! IT's THE BEST STORY ON KP!!!!!! OMG!!!!!'

2. YOU SAY YOU'RE NICE IN REAL LIFE. IN MY OPINION, IF SOME ONE IS NICE THEY SHOW IT EVERYWHERE.

3. STOP GETTING SO STUPIDLY ANGRY AT ALL OF US. IF YOU DON'T WANT COMMENTS, GET OFF.

 

Plain. Cold. Facts. I was going to say how this one was the best arin (execpt for no PARAGRAPHS!!!!! >:() EXCEPT I SO HOW RUDE YOU WERE. UGH. I AM SICK OF THIS STUPID LITTLE TEMPER TANTRUM YOU HOLD, I AM SICK OF FIGHTING WITH YOU, AND I AM SICL OF ARIN> D:<

 

Posted by Leia on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 08:14
You know what that's called,

You know what that's called, Alison? When you go on and on about how you thing Arin is the best thing that ever happened to his site? It's called being vain and concieted. That might sound harsh but it's true. That's how is sounds. In fact, all Arin has done for KP is cause fights. It is benefiting no one, not even you because with each Arin post you make more enemies. I would be willing to forgive but somehow I think your pride would get in the way fo that.

*{I keep trying to kidnap Jasper, but every time, Alice is at the window with a baseball bat, waiting for me. How does she kn--ohh, right.}*

Posted by WolfWriter on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 08:22
GO WOLF WRITER!!!!!!! On a

GO WOLF WRITER!!!!!!!

On a Papa John's order form: Unlimited toppings on any Large Pizza (max 7 toppings)

If you like tacos, clap your hands! I love tacos, I clap my hands!!! (hi Lucky!!!) My signatures are about food. Why? Because I'm hungry!!!!

Posted by Leia on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 08:28
I agree with you Leia

I agree with you Leia wolfwriter. Alison this tantrum fight has gone on long enough, every time someone tries to help you, you push them away, and then add fuel to the fire. You know what that means? It means you keep making a small disaggreement into a war. You say your almost 12, but the way you act, and the way you treat us makes me think you are 2. You have to handle this maturely, and tell them calmly why you are upset instead of screaming at all of us. You tell us how hard you work, but as someone said, you are being vain. Whenever these fights come up, I look through everything else that has happened with Arin, and you have been pretty mean to us. You come always so hurt from these fights. But so do we, how do you think we feel being thrown harsh comments? Arin is only made popular by how well you write it. Not by if you make an Arin college, or Arin Sims. Other people make sure they are proud of there work before they post it, and they use CC to help them farther. But if you are proud of your story fine by me. But not accepting help will not make you advance in writing. Sometimes you need help from people so they can give you an extra push. SInce I don't want to get to much in the middle of this huge fight, and I am unsure if you still want me doing this, cause you haven't sent me any chappies (my abreviation of chapters, not Arin's last name.) I quit being your editor, I wanted to help you with this, but I rather get out of this before you get to mad, at me. I am going to stick up for my friends here on KP. Fighters always lose. Remember that.

 

 

 

Move along aliens so brains here. ~Me

Posted by Kathryn!!! on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 08:52
P.S The reason no one else

P.S The reason no one else is doing a christmas special is cause, ITS NOT CHRISTMAS. Sorry I had to get that out

 

Move along aliens so brains here. ~Me

Posted by Kathryn!!! on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:27
Delete my e-mail and I will

Delete my e-mail and I will delete yours. I have seen Christmas Specials out in July once. I am not e-mailing you anymore. I will delete all the e-mails you have sent me so far and don't e-mail me ever again.

Posted by Alison on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:52
I don't want your editing

I don't want your editing stuff nomore. All I want is for you never to talk/type/e-mail me ever again!!! Delete all my e-mails and I will delete all your e-mails. I am tired of this. Maybe I should quit. Good Luck trying for nothing.

Posted by Alison on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:54
Okay Alison that was

Okay Alison that was uncalled for, and very rude. Think about how upset I am, I have a lot on my plate right now, and I rather not get in the middle of a huge fight,

 

Move along aliens so brains here. ~Me

Posted by Kathryn!!! on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 14:03
Oh shut up you big mouth.

Oh shut up you big mouth. All Arin has done is nothing. Its the way people want my stories is what has caused these fights. I don't want any help yet you guys beg me or yell at me to get me to use it. I am ignoring all those. I don't want paragraphs. I don't want CC. I don't want my books to be realistic like yours. So stop bugging me about it!!

Posted by Alison on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:56
I AM NOT SAYING SHES THE

I AM NOT SAYING SHES THE BEST STUPID!!!!! BUT ALL YOU THINK SHE ISSSSS!! SO SHUT THE HECK UP. JUST STOP THIS FIGHT BY SHUTING YOUR FAT MOUTHS!!!

Posted by Alison on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:58
Ok, that was uncalled for.

Ok, that was uncalled for. HOW ABOUT YOU SHUT YOUR FAT MOUTH AND WE STOP OURS!!

On a Papa John's order form: Unlimited toppings on any Large Pizza (max 7 toppings)

If you like tacos, clap your hands! I love tacos, I clap my hands!!! (hi Lucky!!!) My signatures are about food. Why? Because I'm hungry!!!!

Posted by Leia on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 11:32
Everything you guys said to

Everything you guys said to me before was uncalled for. Everything you guys said to me was uncalled for. You say for me to change my books, I say I am gonna quit, you say no please stay, and then yell at me to change my books. MAKE UP YOUR DARN MINDS. Oh, and one more thing, ummm, lets say, what would you guys think if I got my Arin and the Baby books to at least chapter 30 or 35. I know its off topic but I wanted to know.

Posted by Alison on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 11:37
Alison, this is no game we

Alison, this is no game we are real people treat, so us like that. We are not fictional charactesr you can be mean to.

 

Move along aliens so brains here. ~Me

Posted by Kathryn!!! on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:29
I never say that!!! I always

I never say that!!! I always say Read Arin or just don't or something like that, I will not get off, most of my books don't have comments! When I made a realistic book, you all did squat and didn't even noticed them, when I do Arin books, you yell at me!!! Maybe I don't want comments, not a lot of people do! Doesn't mean I have to get off you dumb ugh!!!! Like junie B. Jones said (I read her a few years back) YOU DUMB BUNNY!!!

Posted by Alison on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:46
Oh and when I make my

Oh and when I make my unrealistic books unrealistic, people want them more realistic!!! Whats the point of Arin if I can't write and all you guys is for her to become all nice like the books Lemony Snicket writes? All I want is for Arin to stay the way she is right now. I don't want any changes, CC, or any comment of it being unrealistic.

Posted by Alison on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:44
This was the best Arin yet,

This was the best Arin yet, Allison...but you ruined it with all the hate comments.  Why?

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Posted by Alex (A. Tedford) on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 08:45
I never started this. But

I never started this. But people always blame me!!! Someday, I might end up in jail for what people blame me on. Like you guys, I might get kicked off becaUSE YOU GUYS WANT ME OFF. Sorry caps, no I am not sorry!!!! Its always my fault when its not. My entire life, I have gotten blamed on something and gotten kicked off or banned forever. So, you guys are gonna just keep doing this and I am just gonna keep crying or trying to get back on and all you don't even care!!!

Posted by Alison on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 09:49
Really. You didn't start it?

Really. You didn't start it? This whole fight wouldn't have started if you hadn't yelled at Danielle. personally, I don't mind if you write Christmas now.

Her: Why is there a Christmas book in September...???

You: Well, I thougt some people might have liked a change in topics. I'm glad you asked!

See? isn't that much better?

On a Papa John's order form: Unlimited toppings on any Large Pizza (max 7 toppings)

If you like tacos, clap your hands! I love tacos, I clap my hands!!! (hi Lucky!!!) My signatures are about food. Why? Because I'm hungry!!!!

Posted by Leia on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 11:35
Alison, I read what you

Alison, I read what you wrote about Camille *sorry if I spelt it wrong* that just proves that I shouldn't care about you. We did get pretty mad at Camille, but she GOT OVER IT. So I can understand why you've gotten kicked off or banned or whatever before. What you wrote about Camille made you look like a jerk, not a 'nice' person, like you claim to be. So yeah, I'm going to want you off if you continue posting stuff like this.

 

My mind + a sharpie marker. What's the worst thing that could happen?

Posted by Bree! on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 13:47
Alison you are treating us,

Alison you are treating us, like horrible people, we are trying to help. You got to not get mad at what everyone is doing.

 

Move along aliens so brains here. ~Me

Posted by Kathryn!!! on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 14:05
Accually thats the first

Accually thats the first time and I am trying to get over it by ignoring but you guys re-fuel the fight by commenting some more. So why don't we all change the subject. My stories are just inocent little words with big fights because now-a-days, nobody cares how good I work to make the books how they are today. I may want to grow up and do dangerous jobs for great money, but theres a few things that aren't what I am today. What I meant in that, I am just trying to make a point, even though I might want to do something dangerous, it might change because somebody told lies or rumors (same thing i guess) and I couldn't get those jobs, but when I ignored them and they kept re-fueling the fight, I just couldn't hold in my anger and kept going. Deep inside, I really am nice, but when I try to get the truth out, I can't say it the way I wanted to say it. So, if we all just stop with the commenting everytime I reply, then this could stop. Oh and I don't sorry alot so inside, I am saying sorry, but I don't say/type/post it.

Posted by Taco on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 14:07
If you're too prideful to

If you're too prideful to apologize to our faces, then why should we stop?! You have gotten yourself in deeper than you planned, and if you don't want CC an you don't want comments then what is the point of Arin on KP? And if you're so conceited and proud to say 'sorry' to us, a straight-out honest apology, then I guess maybe you shouldn't have even replied. So I have to stand behind my fellow KPers, including the ones you've called stupid and told to shut up. Because we aren't your pawns or your characters Alison. I know you never said that but actions speak louder than words and if that's true, then you're screaming that you hate us. And we won't stand for that. I won't stand for that. Because I am tired of watching from the shadows as you tear apart my friends, even after I have never seen them face to face, and I sure as heck am not letting you rip us apart. SO. BACK. OFF.

*{I keep trying to kidnap Jasper, but every time, Alice is at the window with a baseball bat, waiting for me. How does she kn--ohh, right.}*

Posted by WolfWriter on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 14:29
Wow Wolfwriter... good

Wow Wolfwriter... good speech... maybe it wasn't SA who stole my speech powers, no just kidding :]

 

*L*I*L*Y*0*9*

Posted by *L*I*L*Y*0*9* on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 14:52
I get speechy when I'm

I get speechy when I'm upset, and my replies get much more controlled and still effective the calmer and more clear-headed I get.  ;)

*{I keep trying to kidnap Jasper, but every time, Alice is at the window with a baseball bat, waiting for me. How does she kn--ohh, right.}*

Posted by WolfWriter on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 14:58
Have you even READ what I

Have you even READ what I just put up???!!!

Posted by Taco on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 15:10
Dudette... You know you

Dudette... You know you could've said that calmly. If you did, I would try to forgive you. I don't take back the things I've said before to you, which weren't any worse than anything you said to my family.

 

My mind + a sharpie marker. What's the worst thing that could happen?

Posted by Bree! on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 17:38
Your family? What did I say

Your family? What did I say about your family?

Posted by Taco on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 17:56
KidPub

KidPub family...

 

Imagination is a writer's best friend~Me

Posted by *L*I*L*Y*0*9* on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 18:18
What she said. That's how

What she said. That's how most of us think of each other.

 

My mind + a sharpie marker. What's the worst thing that could happen?

Posted by Bree! on Sun, 09/05/2010 - 18:58
I was just searching around

I was just searching around KP, and I came to this. I just became a member, so I've been reading older stories, so I can know how

the KPers on here write. Well, this was good. I liked it. Just a few grammar mistakes, but other than that, it was pretty good.

 

Caleigh

Posted by Caleigh on Fri, 01/07/2011 - 18:56
since ur new here, I am not

since ur new here, I am not gonna get mad at everything. Can you name a few of the grammar mistakes please?

 

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Posted by Dancin' Ali! on Fri, 01/07/2011 - 19:54
It's nothing big. Just

It's nothing big. Just change the to they. I can't remember what sentence, but it's near the end. but other than that, it's good.

 

Caleigh

Posted by Caleigh on Fri, 01/07/2011 - 20:28


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