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To Be a Princess I Prologue

To Be a Princess I Prologue

Sophia-Rae's picture
by Venus
in a land of broken dolls, bronze sunsets, and hearts that always loves true

*~Prologue~*

 

Emery looked at daughter with loving concern. "So what is her name, dear?" she asked her daughter Giselle. She thought for a moment gazing into the baby's unusual green-hazel eyes. "Laurinda." Giselle decided after a moment of thought. Emery nodded in aproval. "A name fit for a Princess!" exclaimed Emery. Giselle nodded yawning.

 

Giselle gave little Laurinda to Emery with great care. "You must take care of her. My time has come. I can't escape it any longer. They'll be coming. Only let her know when the time is right. I trust you Mother. Always remind her that I am looking over her!" Giselle murmured. Emery nodded, her eyes watering. This was never a fate that any Mother would want to see their daughter go through.

 

Then came the pounding. Heavy pounding was outside the door. Emery kissed her daughter one last time on the forehead before descending the stairs in the secret room. A shot was fired with the golden bullet - for royal assinastions only. Emery cringed. Half of her wanted to go back, the other knew what she should do, what she needed to do. Little Laurinda's fate rested in her very hands.

 

As Emery reached the bottom of the steps, as she was pushing the heavy brick door, she could hear the shouting of the guards looking for the baby. She looked down at Laurinda and without any hesitation, she ran into the dark, stormy, night.

 

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A/N: First chapter should be out later today! PLEASE comment! Good or bad is appreciated!


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I like it! Good beginning!

I like it! Good beginning!

Posted by Andrew on Wed, 04/07/2010 - 09:17
Thatwas really good. I

Thatwas really good. I definitley want to read more.

 

 

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Posted by Jellybean on Wed, 04/07/2010 - 10:48
Wow. Do I get my point

Wow. Do I get my point across by just saying 'wow'? I think so. Wow.

~EmmaR

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Posted by Emma on Wed, 04/07/2010 - 10:55
I agree with EmmaR. I mean,

I agree with EmmaR. I mean, that is a killer beginning! I want a book abou that! That is probably the best prolouge ever!

 

You can be you want to be. No one has the Stop sign to your destiny. Be free to be you.

Posted by Crazy 8 on Wed, 04/07/2010 - 17:27
Thanks so much guys! The

Thanks so much guys! The Most comments I've ever gotten thanks again!

~Sophia~

*~"If Gymnastics were easy, they'd call it football!"

*~Gracie (To Me): Your voice is light a knife in my throat!

*~Abby: Wow. How did that get there?

Posted by ~Sophia~ on Wed, 04/07/2010 - 18:24
oooh....i love it! it really

oooh....i love it! it really grabs you, makes you wanna read more! the prologue's awesome!

Imagination is wealth that cannot be stolen.

Posted by Amy on Sun, 04/11/2010 - 13:28
Great job! I love short but

Great job! I love short but sweet prologues. They capture me right away!

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Posted by Stardream on Sun, 04/11/2010 - 17:22


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