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Beach

Beach

by TheVintageLily
in somewhere

As my feet touch the grainy tan sand

I smell the bitter salt in the air

The frothy, warm waves crash against the damp shore

My bucket is filled with seashells but I'm urging to collect more

A small ghost-like crab scuttles from right behind my feet

A fish is scooped up in a pelican's beak

Getting splinters from the old worn out pier

When I finally catch a fish, I let out a cheer

During the days, in the smoldering sun

A dip in the ocean is lot's of fun

But at night in  the salty breeze you can see

The waves rolling gently in the sea

The echoes of the ocean

Gently lull me to sleep

And then you know

You're at the beach


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Beautiful!  You make me

Beautiful!  You make me miss living in Washington State by the ocean... :'(

 

 

Read my story The Providers please! :)

Posted by Esther (Algebra... on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 14:45
Well thank you! ;)

Well thank you! ;)

Posted by Lily on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 16:22
2I really like this poem. It

2I really like this poem. It is sweet and cute, the type of thing you'd find on magnets and other trinkets. I love all the rhymes, but I have a tiny bit of CC- The first couple of lines dont rhyme but the rest do, so it sort of changes the beat and pace of the poem. Other than that, a really nice poem:)

 

Book Cover Business!

Posted by Starfire ( rebecca ) on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 16:57
Thanks for the advice!:)

Thanks for the advice!:) I'll Definantly try that next time:)

Posted by Lily on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 19:13
It's gorgeous! <3 it!!!!

It's gorgeous! <3 it!!!!

Posted by Margo on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 17:57
Well shank you!!:)

Well shank you!!:)

Posted by Lily on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 19:13
Oh wow. This is beautiful.

Oh wow. This is beautiful. You did a fantastic at describing it too! Great job!

----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (a ... on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 19:55


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