Broken Heart chapter 13
in someplace that is a place? Idk, why do you wanna know?
A.N. Sorry I haven't posted anything in a while I've been busy with school and yesterday my mom wouldn't let me onto my computer cause I forgot to take my medicine (that I don't need but she makes me take anyway.) I'm really sorry. I don't really think this chapter is that good either but it has a lot of action and lots of Magik and there is some BIG revalations.... So comment on what you think. Like I said I don't think it's that good.
Jeremy and I looked at each other. Panic was clearly seen in his eyes. I wasn't suprised. I mean, his girlfreind was in trouble. I cringed at the thought but quickly shook it out of my head. I didn't want to be jelouse of Hanna. I reminded myself. Jeremy helped me because I was still alittle shakey. We both ran to where we had left Hanna. She was cowering underneath a giant animal. It took me a second to idenfiy it as a bear. A giant black bear. I looked at Jeremy panicing.
"Go and try to distract it with some Shadows. Maybe make it look like there is another bear here."
I nodded and soundlessly moved infront of the bear. Hanna screamed again and I wanted so much to shush her so that I could concentrate. I couldn't concentrate easily and panic was making it harder. I tried calling the Shadows several times but each time failed. Jeremy looked at me, perplexed. The bear still hadn't seen me and I was suprised. I glanced at the bears feet and realized what Jeremy had done. He had encrusted mud around the paws so thick that it couldn't move. Jeremy moved towards me as quietly as I had. He reached me and pulled me silently into the forest. Jeremy's hand were on my shoulders and he was so close that I could feel his breath. He was breathing heavily and I realized that my healing session that he had given me in the forest and using the Earth Magik had worn him down. He was sweating heavily and midnight blues eyes were weary. I realized that he had been using alot of Magik since last night and very little sleep. He still had a light in his eyes though. He said to me "Try calling them now without all the distractions. I'll try to help you but I don't know how well I'll be able to do that."
I realized I had been lost in his eyes. I noddded and looked away so that I wouldn't be distractated by his beautiful face. I closed my eyes and used all my energy to call upon the Shadows. They came after a couple minutes of me concentrating. I looked at them carefully and said "I want you to make a sillohete of a bear but don't form one. That would be bad. Just go near where the black bear is."
All of them went alittle way a ways. I looked over to Jeremy. He still looked exaghughested. But there was a spark of admiration in his eyes. And it was towards... me. I was so confused. He tried walking over to me but tripped on a root. With lighting fast reflexes I caught him. I helped him stand up. He sat down near a root by a tree and motioned for me to do the same. I sat down next to him and he murmmered to me "Did you know that you are amazingly smart?"
I felt myself blush and said "I'm not that smart."
"Ha. I don't belive it. I've never met someone who could call so many Shadows without even knowing how to." he argued.
I looked at him dumbfounded, "How did you know that I called, like, about sixteen Shadows when I first called them?"
He looked away, ashamed and it looked like he was blushing. He muttered to me "They ordered me to follow you without my presense being known... I did that until you saw me with my uncle. I knew you needed to know me..."
I let this role around in my mind for a second and found that it wasn't that suprising. I alway felt that someone was following me. Though I had never really felt that it was important. I was interupted from my thoughts when Jeremy said more to himself then to me , yet I could still hear it clearl as a bell "I never was supposed to get tangled up with love since I'm supposed to be a gaurdian."
I looked at him confused. I said "What's that supposed to mean?"
He looked at me like he was suprised that I heard him. But then his face softened and he said "I never told you but my whole family is the Shadowed. We're called that cause everyone in my family is able to control all six of the elements. Are last name turned into Shadowed... So each of us are assined a person. Most of the time the person is a Magik user but is normal and learns at a normal pace. But then they learned about you. The oracle, which we are about to meet for the first time, sent a letter telling them about a child born. That was you. This child was going to be able to work the element of Darkness and was going to be very strong. They searched all over the globe until they found Lucifer. Back then he was a good man and a loving uncle. He hid your powers from your parents and every one else. Then I was born and they assingened me to be your gaurdian... Most people don't even know that they have a gaurdian. Never ever. You are one of the few. But anyway, over the years as I got to know you and watched you I.... "
He cut off. I looked away as he did the same. Suddenly Jeremy looked at me and said "I really really started to like you. When I met you for real I started to like you even more. I'm not supposed to love anyone. Espessily not the person I'm assinged to."
I was more confused then ever. Then, suddenly I felt soft lips pressing against mine. And my immediate reaction was to press back. I felt warm hands around my neck and I put my hands around Jeremy's. My heart pounded as I realized what was happening. We both pulled back and Jeremy held me out at arms length. He smiled and said "I never did like Hanna. I've always been in love with you. I just couldn't tell either of you that. But I can't break up with Hanna. They would find out about us if I did that. I'm sorry Zoe."
He pulled me into a tight embrace and all my troubles melted away. All that mattered was he had attmited he loved me. We both pulled back as we heard another heart faultering scream.
Jeremy and I stood up and rushed away from the forest. We saw the bear dead on top of Hanna. She looked tired and beaten up. I realized that I had realesed the Shadows to do whatever they wanted when Jeremy had kissed me. So they had killed the bear, not being under my control. They were their own creatures. They could do whatever they wanted when they weren't inder a Darkness users control. Jeremy immeditly was at her side and used Water and alittle bit of Earth Magik to push the bear off of Hanna. She collapsed in his arms and he pressed his lips against hers. I looked away even though I knew the kiss was fake. Suddenly I heard two bodies thud. And I turned around to see...
A.N. So know you see that it is a sucky chapter. It was really really bad. I know.
~Grace
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Whoa, this is GREAT!
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Stop beating yourself up, Grace, this was AWESOME! One of your best chapters so far! I loved it, really.
Just one question, though. I never did figure out why Zoe almost died a few chapters ago (well, did die and then was brought back). What was that about? Or will that be revealed later?
*Create wonderful things* *Be good* * Have fun* *Write on*
She died because she had run for about six or seven miles with out stopping. I meant to have Jeremy tell her that but I kinda forgot. I'm editing the whole book on Word so I'll repost it... And I'm glad that you like it and all but I think was one of my worst chapters. I just think it was kinda rushed.
Life is life and that is that~ Me
I meant what I said and I said what I meant~ Dr. Seuss
I'm crazy and if you're a freind of mine. then you're probably raving mad too. So if you're not a freind of mine I suggest you run away now.~ ME MYSLEF AND U
GRACE THIS BOOK IS GREAT! Maybe add some more of the emotion and detail, but if this were published, I WOULD BUY IT! SERIOUSLY! I DON'T KID ABOUT THIS TYPE OF STUFF! But your cliffhangers are killing me Grace! MORE!
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