in the Under World
By : Jake Feyes
CHEETAHS
OF WONDER
Fiction
CHAPTER 1
A BOY IS SENT
A long time ago, in a far away galaxy, there was a special type of human that could turn into a cheetah that had special abilities.
They could make fire and water come out of any part of their bodies. They lived on an unknown planet. On Earth millions of these humans were being born. They wait until they’re six to send them up onto the planet, once they get there they will be at least nine. The cheetahs are fighting a war against Earth for their freedom. One day a boy was born with those powers. But his parents didn’t want him to leave. He was held on Earth for 9 years. But the FBI soon found out and then were on the run country to country. But finally the FBI caught them. The parents were sent to jail for life. And the boy stayed in an FBI base until the launch was ready.
CHAPTER 2
WERE AM I
“Soon the countdown for the boy will start.” Said one FBI agent.
“Yah, and then that monster will be long gone.” Said another.
“I can’t believe they’re sending my parents, who didn’t name me because they were to worried about me getting caught by the FBI, to jail for life and sending me to an unknown planet.” Said the boy, who was in a room on the shuttle. Soon the boy started to here 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. He heard rockets boosting up. And then suddenly he was in space. Three years later, he landed on the planet. There was only one question, were am I.
CHAPTER 3
HIS NAME IS DEMU
“Why am I here? I wouldn’t of done anything bad.” He said. Then he heard noises in the bushes. “ Come out who ever you are. I can here you.” He said. Then someone walked out and said, “I come in peace. I have the same abilities as you. I’ll take you to our main base.” He said. So he followed him to the main base. He was reported to the head cheetah, Stangis. “What is your name?” He asked. “I didn’t get a name.” The boy said. “Well then, your name is Demu.” He said
CHAPTER 4
BASIC TRAINING
“Hey, two things, first what’s your name?” Demu said. “It’s Lagon.” He said. “And second thing, when do I get to fight?” Demu asked. “After some basic training.” Lagon said. “Aww man.” said Demu. Day after day he did basic training. But finally Demu finished and was sent to his new squad. Guess what, Lagon was the leader. Then they were sent to the war planet, which is where they fight the war against earth.
CHAPTER 5
THIS IS WAR
“Hi, my name is Seekon.” One squad member said. Another said “And my name’s Loken.” “ And of course you know that I’m Lagon.” Lagon said. “I’m Demu.” Demu said. “Get ready squad 990, you’re about to enter the war planet’s atmosphere.” Said a guy on the radio. “You ready?” Said the guy on the radio. Altogether, at the same time Seekon, Loken, Lagon, and Demu said “Yep.” Then they landed. “Look out for anything weird.” Said Lagon. “Why.” Said Demu. “Because this is war.” Said Lagon.
CHAPTER 6
GET US OUT OF HERE
“Sir I can here someone!”alerted Demu. “Come on out and put your hands up.” Said Lagon. It was Demu’s dad.They let him out of jail to fight in the war.Demu didn’t want him to know it was him so he did not change to his human self. The only bad thing was that five miles behind him were about one thousand soldiers from earth. Before when he was hiding and they didn’t see him he told the others that he found some of the enemies. So now they are about two miles away. The first shot from the earth soldiers were fired. They were all shot in the legs. With their bloody legs they started running. They saw another batch of the enemy and they were shot in the shoulders. Then they finally reached the ship. When they got inside they called a medic and Lagon said “Get us out of here!”
CHAPTER 7
THE SECRET MISSION
“Demu, can you come here a minute.” Said Lagon. “Sure.” Said Demu. They locked the doors over 20 ways. “This is a top secret mission, you will go behind enemy lines and steal their plans.” Said Stangis. “We know you can’t do it by your self, so we are sending Lagon with you. But he is only going to be in the plane with you, not in the enemies base. Now you should know, you could die on this mission, but you’ll die serving for everyone who is fighting today. Everyone will love you if you come back. Do you accept?” said Stangis. “I accept!” said Demu!!!
CHAPTER 8
THE CAPTURING
The plane was rattling back and forth. “Five miles ‘til you parachute out of the plane. Do you have your earth army gear on.” Said the pilot. “Yes” said Demu. “Demu before you go I have to tell you something, you’ll be a hero, so even if you die, the blood of a true hero never dies.” Said lagon. “Go, jump, jump, jump! NOW!!!” said Lagon. He jumped. When he got there no on was outside. So he went in side to report to the General. “ Sir I’m back from my mission.” Said Demu. “Who are you?” said the General. “My codename is Fang.” Said Demu. “ Listen I know you’re a cheetah. So don’t lie to me. Where are the radios on you.” Said the General. “ I don’t have radios.” Said Demu.
“SECRURITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!” said the General.
CHAPTER 9
THE CHOICES
Demu woke up in a dark room. The general started saying “Listen, you have two choices. You can tell us your plans or you can die!!!” “I would rather die you freakin idiot.” Said Demu in anger. “Well then, I’ll get the execution ready” said the general.
CHAPTER 10
THE DEATH
Demu got tied on to a pole. There was over one million people were watching him. Then they started cheering as the guy who was going to kill him walked out. It was his dad!!! The croud started chanting “Kill him” as he took out his gun. He loaded his gun, then aimed, “Wait, before you kill me, I have to say something, Im your son.” Said Demu. “You… you’re… you’re my son! I can’t do this to my son. Kill me not my son.” Said his dad. “Hmmm, I have a better idea, I’ll kill you both.” Said the general. He did the honors of killing both of them. He killed his father first. Then Demu. As Demu’s blood splattered everywhere, he thought of what Lagon said “The blood of a hero never will die.”
Then finnaly demu was dead. They built a memorial for him.
CHAPTER 11
THE RETURN
There was a boy on a rocket to the unknown planet. When he got there they were having lunch, then the boy stood on top of the table and said “My name is Demu, and I’m back.”
To find out what happens next, you’re going to have to read my sequel that I will start on soon, so if you liked this one, you’ll love the next one, and I hope you enjoyed!!! Oh yay... Soon I will make it a movie if posible!!!
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Why not make this a capter
Why not make this a capter book and add a little more detail? It's good!
*~Soccer players live in an opposite world...they have goals...and they don't stop until those goals are in the back of a net....~Me on Soccer~*
It is already a chapter book
It is already a chapter book
Oh...(Duh! the chapter
Oh...(Duh! the chapter labels...stupid me) Like making the chapters a little longer...That's what i meant... I confused myself on that one
*~Soccer players live in an opposite world...they have goals...and they don't stop until those goals are in the back of a net....~Me on Soccer~*
OOOH! OOOOH! OOOH! I LOVE
OOOH! OOOOH! OOOH! I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE! It's got plot it's got suspense it's got mostly everything! The thing is, agreeing with Max, you should make it a bit longer. Add some detail, it's great!
*The shallowest Philosopher of the Lot*
im not but i will put in
im not but i will put in more detail and make it a little longer in my sequel
Cool...I agree with the
Cool...I agree with the others in making it longer, but I'll definitely read the sequel! I liked the part "the blood of a true hero never dies". Well said, and very noble...
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