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Day 60 of my 365 days: The Crunch of Gravel

Day 60 of my 365 days: The Crunch of Gravel

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by Veronica
in Nebraska

A Description: The Crunch of Gravel
Gravel crunched under my feet, and the sky began to turn periwinkle. I spun in the gravel and began to walk backwards. I waved to the distant figger. And gazed at the sky, the clouds spin around me. I hear my sisters pick up another piece of trash, off the side of the road. As I walk the corn fields pass me. The sun is low in the sky, chills run down my back. What a beautiful day. It’s quiet except for the crunching gravel under my feet. I talk a deep breath of the fresh air. Suddenly I hear my sister call, “Race ya!”
my head drops from the sky. I glance at my sister and dart off, down the road, “Oh ya?” I yell leaving her behind.


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That was really good! I

That was really good! I really liked your description of the sky!

Posted by CamiBeth on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 23:29
WORDS FAIL ME

WORDS FAIL ME O____________e

Aahhh..

 

Short, simple and sweet description of gravel. Amen.

XD

Posted by Sailormoon on Tue, 01/31/2012 - 10:53
Good great amazing!!!! I

Good great amazing!!!! I love it! It's so natural- it's normal made interesting!  Very very good- Keep this kind of work up!!!! :D 

 

~Becca Harbor Edson When life gives you sidewalk- take out a colorful stick of chalk and draw pictures for others to enjoy.

Posted by Makayla on Wed, 02/01/2012 - 22:13


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