a different friend of mine is writing a story called: "Supernaturalist" and it is very good this is chapter one
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WESTIE in Maryland |
Supernatralist
By: Enigma
Chapter 1
“Come on,” my seventeen-year-old guardian Rachel whispered, “Time for breakfast.” I mumbled and buried my face into my soft, warm covers, the only thing protecting me from the chilly morning air.
“Then I guess your goanna miss out on my special CHOCOLATE CHIP PANCAKES!!” After I heard that, I slowly got out of bed and walked into the bathroom. I really didn’t feel like doing my hair so I just kept it in its messy state. I walked out of my suite and made my way to the dining hall.
“Hi Justin,” I said sleepily as I saw the perfect blonde haired boy walk in front of me. He turned around.
“Hi Cellsiest,” he said, turning around with a smile. I beamed. He was SMILING at me! Suddenly his smile faded and he chuckled.
“Nice outfit,” he said, still chuckling. I was about to say thanks when I was suddenly interrupted.
“Yeah, nice outfit,” said Cara who walked up behind me and then she burst out laughing. What’s so bad about my outfit? I made the bad choice of looking down. Oh no…I was wearing my JAMMIES!!! Yes, my red and white snowflake shorts with my “cutie” blue shirt with my messy long brown hair. I turned a bright red.
“They didn’t say we weren’t allowed to wear our pajamas to classes,” I said quietly trying not to shed a tear. The only rules at the Indiglo Academy/Orphanage was to do your homework, go to bed on time, and to not use your powers to hurt anyone unless it was an enemy.
Yes, I said powers
The Indiglo Academy/Orphanage wasn’t just for ANY orphan. WE have super powers. Mine just happens to be having a force field and having the ability to turn invisible, which I forced myself to not do at this moment.
Cara rolled her eyes and flipped her red hair as she walked away. Justin smiled at me then walked away.
“Cellsiest!!”
I turned around to find my best friend Arsille flying toward me. Yes she was flying. Arsille can fly.
“Why are you wearing your jammies?” she asked, and then she jumped in the air.
“Cara stole your clothes again didn’t she,” she said in a soothing yet stern voice.
“No,” I said in my usual quiet voice, “ I forgot to get dressed.”
Arsille held back a laugh and then she leaped in the air…again.
“ I forgot to tell you why I called you, WERE GOING SHOPPING TODAY!!!”
I smiled. Every month we get to go to some random place to go shopping, this time it was New York City.
I grabbed my pancakes and sat adjacent to Tora Flower. Tora has super strength but her one weakness is me. She thinks I am adorable. Unlike the others, I am only 12, Arsille is 13 as well as Evan, and the rest are either 15 or 14.
“Hi Cellsiest, you look adorable today!” Tora said cheerfully as she gave me a very tight squeeze. I gave her one back. Tora was so nice to me when I first came to the orphanage; she is just like a big sister.
“Hey squirt,” said Nick Livington with his twin brother Brock Livington standing behind him. I looked up. The only thing those to have in common is their height. They tower over everyone. Nick has light skin. Brocks is a little darker than tan. Nick has brown hair. Brock has black hair. Nick can see the past. Brock can see the future.
“Hi,” is said quietly and gave them both big hugs.
“ Sup?” said a voice behind me
I unleashed the to brothers from my grip and turned around. The wild orange hair on top of that boy’s head could only mean it was Spark Smith.
Spark gave me a quick hug then sat down on the other side of me. Spark is not good at showing his feelings.
Spark and Justin are brothers, but Justin is a year older. If you just met them you would of thought they were only to two people who were forced to be together. They fight ALL the time. I wish they would get along.
“ I’m so excited about going to New York!” exclaimed Arsille as she sat down across from me and started messing with her long black hair.
“I’m not,” said a voice behind me.
I looked up. It was my brother Cal Allison. Cal is quiet and has black hair, he’s fourteen. Standing adjacent to Cal was Nigel Park. Nigel has black hair and is quiet as well.
“ I find the city to be to humdrum,” Cal mumbled making fun of my vocabulary .I rolled my eyes.
“ Hi everyone!” screamed thirteen year old Evan Mystery with his sister Request Mystery at his side. I could tell Request was seething with anger inside because she specifically told him NOT to do that. Nobody really cared though; it was customary for Evan to say that EVERY morning. Request stalked off and sat adjacent to Arsille.
“ Maybe we can sell him in New York City, it might bring up some cash,” she said, insinuating that she wanted more spending money.
“ And you think Rachel would even LET us?” said Cara who seemed to be listening to our conversation from her spot next to Justin and Spark.
“ Hey Cellsiest, we will be leaving soon so you might want to get dressed or you might get some stares in New York City,” she said, giving me a foretaste of what the near future might hold.
“K,” I said quietly and quickly exited the dining hall.
Once I got dressed and Tora did my hair, we all quickly boarded our private jet, fighting for the best seat. There really was no reason to fight, they were ALL first class. I sat adjacent to Request who handed me my coat and my new iPod touch.
“ You forgot it in your room, I know you love listening to music on these long plane rides,” she said, giving me a smile.
“Thanks,” I said, giving her a big hug.
“K, everyone buckle up, we will be taking off in five minutes,” Rachel said through the speakers. Rachel had to fly the plane because our school was SO secret, she didn’t want to hire a pilot.
We finally took off. I stuck my earphones in my ears and started listening to Replay. I have NO idea what the songs about, but its catchy.
“Baby are you DOWN, DOWN DOWN DOWN DOWN!” screamed Evan from his seat. He was listening to his iPod as well and obviously did not get the fact that they invented earphones so you WOUDN’T annoy the people around you.
“ Will you just SHUT UP!” yelled Spark from the seat in front of Evan. He turned around and yanked the earphones out of Evan’s ears.
“YOU ARE SO ANNOYING,” Spark yelled seething with anger.
“ You don’t have to be so mean to him,” said Tora. You could tell she was kind of afraid to say that.
“ Well I wouldn’t be SO mean to him if he would just SHUT UP in a while,” huffed Spark.
“ Shut up is a mean word,” said Evan
“ WHATEVER!” yelled Spark.
“ How about everyone just shuts up,” said a voice
We all looked back. Oh my gosh. Nigel said that. I have never herd him say something THAT loud or THAT long.
We finally arrived in New York. We landed at a private airport and before we were allowed to go, Rachel laid down some very surprising rules.
“ You are allowed to go throughout the city without me, BUT you must ALWAYS have someone with you.”
We were all to shock to cheer. Rachel NEVER let us out of her sight. She knew all of our parents’ before they died and promised to take care of us if anything ever happened to them. Rachel was determined to keep that promise.
We all exited the jet without a word. I paired up with Arsille and we headed out to explore the world we never knew.
“ Ohh, Cellsiest look there’s a concert!” she exclaimed. Arsille LOVES music, she is never without it.
“ Who’s singing?” I asked. I’m too short to see over the crowd.
Arsille screamed,“ Its Justin Bieber!!”
“ I think I’ve herd of him, what song is he singing?”
“ I think its Favorite Girl,” she answered.
There were a million screaming girls. I couldn’t even hear Justin singing. Arsille looked at me and could tell exactly what I was thinking.
“ Maybe you should go get a better look,” she winked at me.
I nodded, I looked around to make sure no one was paying attention to me and I quickly became invisible to the world.
I ran through the horde of girls, occasionally bumping them, but they didn’t notice. I finally made my way up to the front and climbed on stage and stood right next to Justin Bieber. I looked out to the audience. To my surprise I saw Request, Tora, and Cara right in the front row. I looked at Request, she was studying Justin hard, and I could tell she was reading his mind. Request can read minds.
Tora was just standing there, staring at Justin and smiling. Cara was making a girl fall by making a large stump grow where the girl’s feet were. Cara can control plants. She can make them bite you, squeeze you, pick you up and more.
I drew my attention from my housemates back to Justin. I have never been this close to someone famous, it was a different feeling. He actually was kind of cute. After he finished his song, I hoped off stage and ran back to Arsille.
“ What was it like to be next to a SUPER STAR?” she asked excitedly.
“ K I guess, it’s really not that exciting, I mean it would have been if I have known who he was.”
Arsille sighed “it’s not your fault Rachel disconnects you from the outside world.”
We walked down the streets of the city peacefully until Arsille suddenly stopped.
“ Hey Cellsiest check it out.”
“ Check out WHAT?” I asked, but then I saw it.
It was Justin, Justin from INDIGLO, and he was talking with another girl…a human.
“ Geez you guys are FAST,” panted Cara as she ran up to us.
“ I’ve been running for the last…” she stopped when she saw Justin. Cara has a HUGE crush on Justin, so this was bad.
“ WHAT is he DOING,” Cara yelled.
Justin and the girl looked at us, Arsille and I smiled shyly, but Cara took full charge.
“ WHAT are YOU doing with HER!” she screamed.
Justin looked both terrified and embarrassed he looked at Arsille and I, and then back at the girl.
“Sorry, this is my sister, Cara, she hates it when I like a girl, she thinks I’m not good looking enough.”
Cara stood there wide mouthed and began to yell when suddenly a dark cloud filled the sky.
NO, not them, not the antis.
Antis look like shadows, just shadows. Every Supernatralist has an anti. Antis are after you to kill you, and then if they succeed they become you.
“ Get her out of here!” I told Justin, but he just stood there.
“I need to help you!” He let go of the girls arm and ran toward me.
“ You take her, I don’t want you to get hurt”
“ I’m not a baby anymore!” I screamed and I pushed him toward the girl. Even though it hurt to see Justin put his arm around the girl’s waist and run, I had to do it.
The antis came hurling toward us and immediately started to attack us.
Cara, Arsille, and I formed an alliance and used our powers to our advantage.
I formed a sphere around one anti with my force field and threw it against a wall. While I was doing this, an anti snuck up behind me and grabbed me by my neck and threw me against the cold, hard, brick wall. I screamed. I hit my head and the world had gone blurry.
“Cellsiest!” Arsille screamed from the sky and flew down toward me at full speed.
Just before she could grab my small body, an anti grabbed her and threw her against the ground.
Cara made a weed wrap around the antis dark, cold body until it fell unconscious. She grabbed Arsille and me and shook us until we finally had the strength to yell at her to stop.
“Pull yourselves together, do you want to get KILLED?” she dropped us on the ground and we pulled ourselves up.
Arsille flew to the sky to view the battle from a bird eyes view, her eyes widened and she screamed.
“Cellsiest, behind you!”
I turned just in time. An anti had a HAMMER and was about to hit me on the head. I pushed him away with my force field and he disappeared.
The antis finally gave up and flew away. We all just sat there and tried to catch our breath.
“We better go find Justin and tell him we are ok,” panted Arsille.
We walked a couple blocks until we finally found him and the girl, but it wasn’t the way we wanted to find him.
His lips were pressed against the girls. We both stood there with wide eyes.
Tears started to fill in my eyes and anger started to form in my body. Suddenly I let out an uncontrollable force field that knocked both Justin and the girl to the ground.
I can’t believe what I just did. Tears started to pour from my eyes, I ran as fast as my little body would allow until I found an abandoned alley. I slid to the ground and buried my face in my arms. I cried uncontrollably until there were no more tears. I sniffed and finally sat up. I checked my watch. 5:30. I had to be at the jet in two minutes. I silently walked down the busy streets until I finally reached the airport. I walk into the jet and to my seat next to Request.
Justin entered the jet with Arsille and Cara trailing behind him. He walked up to me.
“Cellsiest…” he began, but I cut him off.
“Look, just forget about what happened…I’m sorry for ruining you day,”
He began to say something but I popped my earphones in and started to listen to Owl City.
Once we finally reached Indiglo, I ran off the jet and made my way to my room.
“Aren’t you going to have dinner?” asked Nick with his brother Brock at his side.
“I’m not hungry,” I whispered and entered my room.
My room is huge. I have a library, a small living room, a master bathroom, a walk in closet that could fit twenty people, my king sized bed, and a flat screen TV. All of our rooms look like that. Rachel spoils us.
I walked into my closet and made my way to the pajama section. I got undressed and put on the pair that I selected. I turned off my lights and hopped into my bed.
“What do I call this feeling,” I thought. This feeling of hurt, hatred, and sadness. I tear trickled down my cheek and I closed my eyes.
“He’s not worth the hurt,” I whispered.
“He’s not worth the pain.”
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There's already a book called The Supernaturalists...she should consider changing the name but I like it alot...I LVOE the brothers that see the past and future! tell her it's REALLY GOOD :) she should get an account
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I thought it was called supernaturalist and she already knows...she didnt fgure that out until after she started writing the story. i think it's ok as long as she doesnt copy the other story completely though so...but thnks anyway... iwill tell her you said that
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Wow! This is really good! Long chapter. But I like a long chapter. It flows nicely and it's not to rushed or slow. Tell your friend that it's way awesome and I LOVE it!
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