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an EXCLUSIVE sneak peak at my new book-- which I probably won't post on KP!!!!

an EXCLUSIVE sneak peak at my new book-- which I probably won't post on KP!!!!

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by Er-Bear (Erin)
in Texas

My new book, PastPort, sneak peak!

(Btw, this might be a little confusing right now, because all the details are not mentioned. So give my book a chance knowing this, please!)

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“Andrew,” she breathed. Bree’s Voice faltered and she lowered her head to hide a tear dripping slowly from her left eye. “I need you. I need you so badly.” She was grimacing at the extreme pain coming from her right side, where she had been whipped by the ancient Romans. She tenderly touched the wound with her finger, and immediately regretted it. It stung like nothing compared. Inside the dampened cavern, listening to the growling thunder and churning wind only made the situation worse. She had gotten lost being chased by a group of Briar’s spies, and come across the cave as her only choice in the mountainous terrain. The horrible thief, Briar Longhart, was after her and her friends for the sake of five missing treasures--all whom which were puzzle pieces to Bree’s magic pendant, in which she wore around her neck.

Suddenly, a terrible thought crossed her mind as she envisioned Andrew, her beloved, caring Andrew McCarter, being transported to another time period, only to be whipped himself. She shuddered, only causing her to cry harder. She loved Andrew as a treasure, and now she was alone, cold, and lost, with a large, red gash in her side. She looked down, and then remembered the pendant. With the power of time travel, she was able to search for her missing friends, and especially Andrew, herself. But with not a clue where in the world—or time—they were, she was hopeless. Only then did she see the small scrap of worn paper on the floor of the cave in front of her, and a spark of determination ignited within her. Was this a clue? Or was it just some old material?

FIND OUT IN… PastPort!

 

 


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YOU ARE SERIOUSLY NOT GOING

YOU ARE SERIOUSLY NOT GOING TO POST THIS ON KIDPUB! ARE YOU CRAZY! I WANT MORE!!!!! AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH... A 3 THINGS WILL HAPPEN IF YOU DONT POST THIS....

A) I will jump up and down screaming my head off.

B) I will run around in circles and fly to another galaxy, taking my story, the Visionary with me. (there will be many complaints, expecually from LightningBolt.)

C) I WILL RUN IN CIRCLES AND DIE OF EXHAUSTION, COMING BACK TO LIFE, THEN DOING THE SAME THING OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER.... (10009 YEARS LATER) AND OVER AND OVER.... ETC. THEN GO CRAZY SOME MORE....

So you see, I would really appriciate it if you would post more of this story! :D

 

Kay - Please check out my book, The Visionary, and comment!

Posted by Kay on Wed, 06/16/2010 - 14:34
That sounds so cool! :) It's

That sounds so cool! :) It's not really confusing...are you publishing it, that's why you aren't posting it on here?

I know. It's weird. But don't blame me, I'm too awesome to be weird :) Save the trees. Start by not doing homework. Slinky+Escalator=Endless fun.

Posted by Lucky on Wed, 06/16/2010 - 15:06
This sounds really cool!

This sounds really cool! Your use of description is excellent! :) :) :)

Zodiac ~ My newest book! Read the prologue here :) :) :) http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/zodiac-prologue-please-read-7...

Posted by Maddie on Wed, 06/16/2010 - 16:23
YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO US!

YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO US! IT'S NOT FAIR! POSTING THE SNEAK PEEK BUT NOT THE REST........THAT'S CRUEL! And anyway, this looks great.

Posted by MistyGardens on Wed, 06/16/2010 - 18:04
Ok, Maybe I'll post more. :)

Ok, Maybe I'll post more. :) wow, I didn't know so many of you would like it! and yes, I'm thinking of publishing it, so that's why it was a sneak peak!

check out my stories @ http://www.kidpub.com/viewTracker/409 please!!!!!

Posted by Erin on Thu, 06/17/2010 - 08:00


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