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Faith: Prologue; I am very proud of myself!!! 8)

Faith: Prologue; I am very proud of myself!!! 8)

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by Invader GIR (Blue Phoenix)
in Pangaea

Faith           by C L Strain

 

 

Prologue

 

What gets your adrenaline pumping better than driving your motorcycle 100 MPH on the autobahn? That’s right, meek citizens.  Nothing.  And that’s EXACTLY what I was doing right then and there.  Then being a week ago, and there being in Germany.  I swerved right to avoid being hit by a SUV, then popped a wheelie to avoid another car.  I sharply turned into a small road way leading to a large building.  It was a boarded-up warehouse.  I skidded my bike on its side as I back-flipped of it.  I landed silently, and then went on to run up to the door.  I snatched a lock-pick from my pocket, and in two seconds, had the door expertly open.  I took a deep breath, and then somersaulted as sneakily inside as I could.  I touched the center of the jewel on my necklace and spoke into it:

“Hey, Cindy, one more time, just explain my mission to me.   So, you know, I don’t make a mistake that costs billions of Americans to, well you know, DIE.”

I heard a sigh.  “You’re mission is to destroy all of the terrorist group known as the Banes.”
“My best friends.”  I said dreamily as I turned a corner, elbowed one in the gut, then back-fisted him in the nose.

“Are you okay?”

“Never better.”  I said, pulling a silenced pistol out and shooting another in the leg, then kicking him in the face.

“Okay…”  She said, “Infiltrate the group, and I’ll be there in about ten minutes to hack their system for any useful info.”  She paused, “Good luck, Tucker.  God bless you’re brave, but very psychotic self.”

I blasted a few holes through the wall, alerting the scum inside. I dove for cover around the corner as ten men came out, all with muscle shirts and loaded M-16’s they had stolen from a US military base months before.

“Who’s there?”  One said, “I said, WHO’S THERE?”

“You’re worst nightmare:  a Unicorn!”  I replied, somersaulting out, firing as fast as my semi-auto nine millimeter would let me.  Several bodies lay on the ground already, and I back-flipped to my feet to stay alive.  I shot several more down before my ammo ran out.  I dove at another, hitting him hard.  He went down cold as I round-house kicked another across the face.

“It’s just a ki-” I hit him with the butt of my 9 mil. I stood over his body.

“Yeah.  Y’all all just got whooped by a freaking thirteen year old.  Pshh.  What wimps.”  I then hit him as hard as I could with my pistol, right in the kidney.

I turned to see my associate, Cindy, pull up on her motorcycle.  She got off her bike and walked toward the entrance.  But before she could enter, a Bane snatched her, put her in the back end of his SUV, and drove off.


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Only CC I have: don't start

Only CC I have: don't start so many sentences with 'I'. Other than that, looking good!

*{I keep trying to kidnap Jasper, but every time, Alice is at the window with a baseball bat, waiting for me. How does she kn--ohh, right.}*

Posted by WolfWriter on Mon, 08/30/2010 - 17:03
I love it!WRITE NOT FIGHT!

I love it!WRITE NOT FIGHT! Please read my books!: 'To Find the Truth' (a novel), 'The Message', 'That's Life' (a novel). It is greatly apprieciated! Thanks! ktkat

Posted by Katie on Mon, 08/30/2010 - 17:16
i like it. and now since i

i like it. and now since i like it...U BETTER WRITE MORE NOWW OR ELSEE U WILL SUFFERRR

Posted by Danielle on Mon, 08/30/2010 - 17:25
Nice! A lot of good action!

Nice! A lot of good action! I like it!

~Sis (Maddie) My newest book = Ember Hope (http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/ember-hope-very-long-prologue...) Comments would be soooooo appreciated- thanks!

Posted by PorcupineGal on Mon, 08/30/2010 - 17:45
Liked it! Lotta action and a

Liked it! Lotta action and a tint of humor! More, plz!

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Posted by Mystify on Mon, 08/30/2010 - 18:49
Ok the only prob I had is

Ok the only prob I had is that I don't think a kid could take down all those guys... I mean it just doesn't seem possible. But other then that it was really good.

Life is life and that is that~ Me

I meant what I said and I said what I meant~ Dr. Seuss

I'm crazy and if you're a freind of mine. then you're probably raving mad too. So if you're not a freind of mine I suggest you run away now.~ ME MYSLEF AND U

Posted by Grace on Mon, 08/30/2010 - 19:30
He had a pistol.  NEVER

He had a pistol.  NEVER give a child a pistol and a bunch of hostiles.   They DO NOT mix very well.

Take that, stupid sludge under the bed!!

Posted by Calvin (and Hob... on Mon, 08/30/2010 - 20:11


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