the final words!!
in South Australia
Then the horrer started! I fell down on a carpit and then saw a bunch of scary eyes then the next thing i know is that i'm traped in an ancient egyption cell" said Connor. Arpan looked at the fire on the wall next to him he went to it with his knees and feet because he was tied up! and burned the ropes on it,then freed tom and Connor.as they were about to escape a realy bad and loud noise filled the tunnels.tom looked to Arpan looked to Connor and he saw a huge cobra slithering towards them!"Ahhh a giant cobra'' screamed Connor in fear as it neared towards them."We're all gonna die"replied Connor again.
"No we are not!"replied a voice from behined.The trio turned and got the shock of their lives!.It was Ryley and Thomas's sister Sarah.Ryley got a burning piece of wood fromthe walls and threw it at the cobra.it hit it straight in the eye. The cobra screeched in pain and got really angry.It nocked the whole group of their feet and they all crashed in to the wall on the other side of the tunnel.
"This thing is too strong"replied Sarah with a worried sort of expretion on her face."No it isn't" said Arpan."We just need to think".Suddenly Ryley jumped in the air in exitment."what is it Ryley?"said Thomas."Thomas build five crossbows and make a 100 arrows" said Ryley,"we'll put the arrows on fire and shoot them into the mouth of the Cobra"."And we will distract it while tom is building it'' said Arpan.The four ran to the cobra and attacked it with sticks and rocks but it had no effect.Then finanley Thomas finished the crossbows and they each picked up one and andt launched it into the cobras mouth.The cobra squeled and cried and then fell dead to the ground.Then the all ran home without making a sound.
The end
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That was really great!!!!!! I love the story line!
The only mistakes I found were in punctuation and a couple spelling errors. Here's some CC:
Then the horrer started! I fell down on a carpet and then saw a bunch of scary eyes. The next thing I know, I'm trapped in an ancient egyption cell!" said Connor. Arpan looked at the fire on the wall next to him. He went to it on his knees and feet because he was tied up, and burned the ropes on the fire,then freed Tom and Connor. As they were about to escape, a really bad and loud noise filled the tunnels. Tom looked to Arpan and looked to Connor. He saw a huge cobra slithering towards them! "Ahhh a giant cobra'' ,screamed Connor in fear as it neared
towardsthem."We're all gonna die!" ,replied Connor again."No we are not!" ,replied a voice from behind.The trio turned and got the shock of their lives! It was Ryley and Thomas's sister Sarah. Ryley got a burning piece of wood from the walls and threw it at the cobra. It hit it straight in the eye. The cobra screeched in pain and got really angry. It knocked the whole group off their feet and they all crashed into the wall on the other side of the tunnel.
"This thing is too strong!" ,replied Sarah with a worried sort of expression on her face."No it isn't!" ,said Arpan."We just need to think." Suddenly Ryley jumped in the air in excitment."What is it Ryley?" ,said Thomas."Thomas build five crossbows and make a 100 arrows," said Ryley,"We'll put the arrows on the fire and shoot them into the mouth of the Cobra." "And we will distract it while Tom is building it.'' ,said Arpan.The four ran to the cobra and attacked it with sticks and rocks, but it had no effect.Then, finally Thomas finished the crossbows and they each picked up one and launched it into the cobras mouth.The cobra squealed and cried and then fell dead to the ground.Then they all ran home without making a sound.
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An intresting eding scene, for sure.
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