Golden Mansion Chp. 5
 | by
Gabriella in Illinois |
Voices Part 1
As everyone walked through the mansion Charlotte heard voices.
"Do you hear that?" Charlottle asked.
"No??" May said.
But Charlotte knew she heard something.
It sort of sounded like her father but she could'nt be sure.
She could never be.
Sorry it's so short I'll put lots tomorow!
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Great job, yet short! A little more description would make it positively amazing! Such as, what does the mantion look like?
Some say the skys the limit. So tell me why there's footprints on the moon?
That was pretty good, but short.