in A place so far from were I want to be...
Asher turned to Henry. His red eyes searching… It felt like they were looking into Henry’s soul. Henry shuddered, and looked away.
“What will happen to us?” he asked.
“I’m not sure.” Henry reached into his pocket, and his hands closed around something small, and wooden. He pulled out the box. It was 2 peaces of curved wood, bound with metal. He flicked the rusted latch, and the box opened. There was a small metal object with a string attached and a bit of paper. Henry unfolded the paper, and read the three strange words on the paper. ‘Go home, now.’ A scream echoed around the valley. Henry started to run.
“MUM! DAD! SALLY!” He shouted their names, and the screaming continued. He reached his house, and as he climbed over the gate he was lifted off his feet. The explosion that came from the house sent shards of glass and chunks of brick flying in all directions.
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Ok... let me tell u some
Ok... let me tell u some things....
1) Yes I know this one is short... but the next bit is quite long.
2) I know I said I wouldn't post anymore today, but ah well... I did
3) this was nearly just the start of the next chapter, but I put them apart, so I got a bit more time to write chapter 6.
4) pls pls pls pls try to get ur frends into this series... it will get better.
5) sorry if u think this is bad, but there is magic in the next chapter. all will be explained in a few chapters time...
and last but not least
6) coz u won't get much Grave for a bit, I will put up a spoiler... but it is in backwards. so you have to think to read it. ok?
*spoiler aleart*
s'yrrah dad lliw borp eid
*spoiler over*
Thanks
Love.
A profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person.
I still don't get it...
Umm... don't you mean
Umm... don't you mean Henry??? But anyway, this is really good!!!!!
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*Just keep telling yourself that*- MEEEE!!!!
Yeah this is good...and i
Yeah this is good...and i like that there's going to be magic! hehe lol
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"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is the present that's why they call it a gift." -- my RE teacher and that kung foo turtle
Your genius has struck
Your genius has struck again. I read the whole thing so far, and wanted to comment but saved it for here.
Exellent job all-in-all.
Work on not being too gruesome or suggestive. I'd hate for you to get kicked off for writing something good but... less than appealling.
I love this story, will comment on every chapter from this point and encourage you to continue.
I'd dare say this is one of your best works Ben.
Now you go comment on one of my stories. Lol. Jk.
So lock the windows, and bolt the doors. Cuz I've got enough problems without creating more! ~Relient K Devastaion and Reform
Would I get kicked off? I
Would I get kicked off? I did put a note in the title... and it is a horror story.
Love.
A profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person.
I still don't get it...
No no, that's not what I
No no, that's not what I meant.
I meant just watch out. It can be easy when you're writing to let your vivid imagenation get in the way.
I have to backtrack on a whole bunch of my stories because of my creativity, you should see some of the stuff I write when I'm angry and un-heading.
So lock the windows, and bolt the doors. Cuz I've got enough problems without creating more! ~Relient K Devastaion and Reform