I See: Part Three of Forty Days

by {Olivia Asta}
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I see
everything.
Am I God?
Oh, if I
only
were.
I see
everything.
Everything
I can see
is all that
there is
to see.
At the
top of
my hill
I see
know
feel
everything.
Everything.
Am I God?
If I
only
were.
Oh, if I
were...
I would
see
the same.
And I
see
everything.

-Olivia Asta


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GREAT JOB!!!!! The only

GREAT JOB!!!!! The only thing i would say is that we (the reader) should know the old lady more. i only know she is an old lady because of your note at the bottom. maybe have another point of veiw..... GREAT JOB, THOUGH!!!!!

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-Louisa May Alcott


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