Idea... good bad???
in sane
A shotgun rang out in the distance.
"Nick?" I asked. No reply. I looked at the game in my hand. Tyrell, my husky, barked.
"Nick?!" I asked again, fear arising in my voice. No reply. And then I remembered: Nick didn't have a gun. He had a knife. What fool goes hunting without a gun? I thought so many times.
But Nick didn't have a gun! Who else was out here?
I felt my legs pounding against the earthy ground. Where was Nick? Where was he? My mind raced; every knowledge in my mind dissapeared. Why were there so many trees? Why was there a dog behind me? Why was I here.
I remembered everything when I came to Nick's body.
"Nick!" I screamed. Tyrell whined and wen't to lick Nick's face. Tears escaped my eyes. I fell to my knees.
This couldn't be true! It was too much to be true.
It felt like one of those movies.
After that, all I remembered was reaching my house. Somehow. Once in my house, I bawled over Nick. Dad walked out from the kitchen and stepped back in surprise.
I felt so small... smaller than normal. Smaller than my petite, 18 year old self.
I could make out Dad's sobs. Oh well. Nothing mattered anymore.
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Awww...did her brother die or something? Good job, I will be expecting more. No pressure. *taps foot* *whistles nonchalantly* Are you done yet? No, sorry...*repeats* Are you done now????
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~*^*Athena*^*~
*sits down looking at Lily* I'm waiting for moooorree......... AND I AINT LEAVING TILL I GET IT! :P
REALLY REALLY GOOD JOB!
~Kay~
This is great! I WANT MORE!!!!!