At Last---an edited version of a slightly short poem that I litterally just wrote (like an hour ago) PLEASE READ!
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NightOwl0_0 (a girl who is in a whirlpool of thoughts; trying to decide who she likes better: Finnick or Peeta *sigh* |
A/N: Hi everyone. I just posted a poem and now I posting the edited version of that same poem. I really hope you like this! And Pokey--is the ending still predictable? Thanks for reading and comments are very much appreciated!
AT LAST! You pay
For the consequences of
The words you say
AT LAST! You cry
Because of all that you did
Because of all that you did
To me
AT LAST! You see
What you put me through
When you did what you did to me
AT LAST! You feel
What you made me feel
When you broke my heart
In two
AT LAST! You know
What it's like being me
And how I feel when I see you
AND AT LAST!
My heart can mend
And the wound will never
Be opened again
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Ooh... me likey. :) I'm terrible at writing poems, so I'm probably not a very good judge, but I love this poem!!!
"I dream of a better future, where chickens can cross roads and not be questioned about their motives." Please read my story!!! http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-chapter-1-first-pers...
Thank you Stephanie! It means a lot. :)
----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0
Your poetry is always so strong, so full of energy and emotion and honesty. :) And this poem is no exception. Well done, my friend!
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The planet Ectroi is waiting for you...
Thanks Ash! And I think you already know how much your comments mean to me... :)
----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0