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~The Last Spark~: Prologue to my new book!!!!

~The Last Spark~: Prologue to my new book!!!!

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by AnnaMator
in a place where unicorns and the bogeyman live in harmony

 

I present to you....The Last Spark, a book that I'll most likely be continuing. If you can't tell, it's about wolves. Please comment with CC and tell me if I should continue! I've got a lot of plans for this book....

~AnnaMator

 

 

THE LAST SPARK

 

 

Prologue:

Fear cursed through Fallyn’s veins as the dark wolf stood there. Stuffed in between Fallyn’s shaky paws were two small pups, just days old. The scrawny wolf before them was a seer, a prophet who was never wrong. Fallyn hoped for the sake of her twins that this time he was. The words he was speaking were too harsh, sounding alien to Fallyn.

“-the time will come, when even family turns on one another. Your daughters will lead this turn, alpha. You’re daughters are destined to-“ The wolf spoke loud and strong, which was strange coming from such a small body. Fallyn blocked out his words now, not able to bear them any longer. No, she thought, don’t say it. Don’t!But he did.

“-your daughters are destined to die at each others claws.” The shaky wolf darted off now, leaving Fallyn in complete silence except for her own shallow whimpering.

“No. I won’t let it happen. I won’t allow it.” And that’s when it cam to her.

Sitting up a little straighter, Fallyn let the last tear fall to the den’s floor. She howled and a pair of strong wolves appeared by the den.

“Fetch me two tablets and a bowl of dye.” The two bounded off quickly then reappeared just as fast.

“My lady, whatever do you need these for?” asked the larger of the two.

“You shall see in time, omega. You will see in time.” Fallyn began to scratch a series of lines into the two tablets, one of her daughter’s names on each.

“Now, fetch me the two strongest of the messengers.” Fallyn read over what she had written on the tablets. It is good, she thought, it is good. She sat there, stroking the twoinfant she-wolves, one of them destined to be alpha, both destined to die. Staring into their matching charcoal gray eyes, she stared at their pelts. One was a dark black, clear as the midnight sky. The other was pure white, like a coat of winter had settled permanently onto her skin.

The two messengers walked slowly into the den. One looked questioningly at Fallyn.

“My Lady, what use can we be to you?”

“Come here.” The two wolves crept closer, and she gently pushed one of her pups toward each of them.  “These two are destined for a treacherous fate. That seer, the wolf Malik, has ruined their lives with his prophecy. You’re job, though, you’re job could save them. Each of you take one. Run as far as you can, one north and one south. Find a pack that will take them in. Don’t bother coming back. Got it?” The wolves were leery of this job.

“My lady, are we supposed to stay with the pack we give your daughter to?”

“Yes. Tell them that Fallyn of the Wind pack sent you. Don’t say anything else. You’re already in more trouble than you should be. Now go, before I change my mind.” The wolves nodded to Fallyn, one of the salt and pepper twins and a stone tablet between each of their strong jaws.

Fallyn managed to hold back her tears until the twins were gone. And then, tear after tear fell down her strong face as she sat and whimpered the whole night.

“My girls. You are important. You two are like Fire and Ice, but so similar.” She called to her long gone daughters.

Little did she know how true that really was. Her twins really were opposites.

Like Fire and Ice.


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Hmm...the only CC i have is

Hmm...the only CC i have is to have more description. This is a story I will deffinitally be following. :)

~Nighty night! Don't let Writer's Block bite! (They crawl in your room and eat your soul...)~Me

Posted by Saphira(Rockshadow) on Sat, 01/28/2012 - 10:25
I agree, but this is a bit

I agree, but this is a bit good.cool

Posted by Jorden on Sat, 01/28/2012 - 10:29
A bit? ~ If aliens are

A bit?

~ If aliens are looking for intelligent life, Earth shouldn't be scared.~ Flat Soda

Posted by Saphira(Rockshadow) on Sat, 01/28/2012 - 10:30
Beautiful story line. I am

Beautiful story line. I am completely hooked!

CC:

There is quite a bunch of extra space under each line. I suggest backspacing a little bit of that so it is like:

 

Little did she know how true that really was. Her twins really were opposites.

Like Fire and Ice.

with all of the lines. Instead of:

 

Little did she know how true that really was. Her twins really were opposites.

 

Like Fire and Ice.

It's easier to read then and looks more professional.

Anyways, I simply adore this prologue and I do suggest a tad more description, but other than that It was phoenomenal!

Posted by Jessica on Sat, 01/28/2012 - 11:49


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