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Let's Try That Again | Prologue

Let's Try That Again | Prologue

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by Samantha
in Texas

PROLOGUE

            Kendall and Travis watched me as I spray painted the finishing touches onto my art. I called it art, but most called it graffiti. Unlike Kendall and Travis, I decided I should leave my mark. And I did, every time, with my flaming phoenix. Wings outstretched to an impossible wingspan and different shades of red making up the inferno around it, it was my best one yet. Better than the one on Mrs. Ricci’s bakery, better than the one on the community center, hell, it was better than the one I did in my own room—and let me tell you, that one was gorgeous.

            But this one was better.

            “Damn…” I heard Kendall mutter behind me. I grinned to myself, glad I was impressing them—glad that after the many times I had done it, it was still amazing.

            Even if it was wrong.

            And boy, it was wrong.

            A delinquent like me shouldn’t have been getting in anymore trouble. But it was a guilty pleasure. Like coffee or heroine.

            Breaking the law was my guilty pleasure.

            I sprayed my signature. Everyone would know who it was. I liked that. Everyone would look at me and whisper, “What happened to that girl? She used to be such a good kid.” They would pity me, they would fear me, but more importantly, they would despise me. They would despise me for ruining their little fantasy neighborhood. With the nice stores and private school. The perfect little cliché.

            It was, like I said, a guilty pleasure.

            I wiped sweat from my forehead. It was a humid night for December and I knew my single cyan-striped hair was sticking to my forehead.

            “Perfect, huh?” I asked, turning to face the boys that I didn’t really claim ‘worthy’, but they worked. They dropped out of school a long time a go, they didn’t do much, hung out with me when they could, when I wanted, it wasn’t really a ‘friendship’.

            We just broke rules together.

            Travis tilted his head to the side, causing his shoulder length blond hair to swish to the side. He grinned, his teeth yellowing from many years of drugs. “Oh yeah. What a great canvas, don’t you think Ken?”

            Kendall hopped onto the railing and swayed a bit, a little drunk. “Oh, a great canvas, Travis.”

            Headlights flashed and blue and red lights reflected off the front doors of the Ms. Breckenridge’s bridal shop. Kendall’s mouth dropped and he scrambled off the rail. The light was bright and I blocked it with my hands.

            “Riley Kennings please put your hands behind your back.”

            I couldn’t help but grin.

            My guilty pleasure was going to get me in trouble.

            If only everyone knew how it got started.

*Wrote this during English, tell me what you think. :)


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Posted by Danielle on Wed, 09/01/2010 - 20:55
That was cool! Your writing

That was cool! Your writing is very realistic, the guilty pleasure part was a good touch :)

Kiki:(after Red Queen has a hysterical fit of laughter) Am I missing something?

Neina:I think SHE'S missing something...

Posted by Ninja Cat on Wed, 09/01/2010 - 21:52
Aww! Thanks, love hearing

Aww! Thanks, love hearing that kind of stuff! Made my day...or night, whatever :)

"No one ever told me I was pretty when I was a little girl. All little girls should be told they are pretty, even if they aren't." ~Marilyn Monroe

Posted by Samantha on Wed, 09/01/2010 - 21:54
Ooooh, awesome job!

Ooooh, awesome job! More!!!

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Posted by Athena on Wed, 09/01/2010 - 23:00
I love how she seems like

I love how she seems like such a real character! I hope you continue this story!

Every person's life is a fairytale written by God's fingers ~ Hans Christian Anderson

Posted by De-Ecrivian on Thu, 09/02/2010 - 01:57
I think I am but I'm not

I think I am but I'm not sure...I posted chapter one up and, like, nobody commented so...yeah.

"No one ever told me I was pretty when I was a little girl. All little girls should be told they are pretty, even if they aren't." ~Marilyn Monroe

Posted by Samantha on Sat, 09/04/2010 - 17:37
I love it!

I love it!

Posted by Kat on Tue, 09/07/2010 - 18:27
  Raven: I just showed this

  Raven: I just showed this to my friend (During class) and she likes it so far.  :)

"Things change, Ian." --Whisper 119 from Tower Prep

Posted by Whisper 119 (R... on Mon, 01/31/2011 - 15:07


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