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Nicole in British Columbia |
jo was a knew life guard.he had tacken a corse after school so in the summer he could have a job to ern some mony.but litlle did he know that this summer was going to be a adventure!jo walked the short way from his house to the beach.it was a busy beach with a ice cream stand to the left and high dive to the right.it looked like there was a t least 60 people at the beach wich ment more people to watch out for.he made his way through the people and at last saw the big chair that he would be sitng on all this summer.he climed the lader and got setled into the chair.the sun was beating down that day so he drank lots of water.he sat there for about 2 hours when he herd somone skreem.he skaned the beach and the water looking for were that scream had come from.at last he trased it to a young girl around 3 that had somhow got out to the dock and was stranded.he quikly got down and ran into the water.jo was a good swimer and he got there in a few seconds.he skooped up the litle girl and swam back to shore.the litlle girl was still crying when her mother rushed up.o thank you!cried the mother.i wasnt paying close atenchin to her and she swam out to the dock.shes a good litlle swimer but she gets scared.jo was glad to have saved the litlle girl.the rest of the day went smoothly with onley a few miner things such as the biger boys trying to swim under the dock and a groop of gorls that were climing up the dock post.jo went home that day pleased with his ferst day of work.
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PLEASE PLEASE work on your
PLEASE PLEASE work on your spelling!!!It distracts a LOT from the actual story!
Nicole how old are you?
Nicole how old are you?
You might want to seperate
You might want to seperate the paragraphs and put quotation marks around the part when they are speaking. Capitilization, Spelling, and Grammar is important to a story! Great story idea, though, go on!