Lifeless - Chapter 3 - A New Beginning (plz comment!)

"I followed you here." A deep voice came out of his mouth.
The fog and rain slowly faded and his face came into veiw.
I knew him from anywhere. "James." I said. I started to feel a bit better. At least he wasn't dead.
"Was up buddy!" His voice was cheerful.
I slapped him a high five and asked, "Where the crud are we?"
"Pennsylvania. I followed you from about the border of New York. We're about ten minutes away from it." James spoke sadly. I guess he wanted to be farther away. His black beard was hard to see from the darkness that surrouded us, but his pale blue eyes sparkled.
"I'm so happy to see you. Do you think you could get these off?" I showed him my handcuffs.
"Hmmm." He took a big pocket knife and slid out a thing that looked like a key.
"I stole this knife. Now, from the crimes I've done, I'm the FBI's number one most wanted." I stared at him with disbeleif. He fiddled with my locks and got them off. I rubbed my wrists. I was bleeding in one place.
"Thanks." I said quietly.
"We better get out of here." We started walking.
"I'm going to start a new beginning. Go far away, have a new name, and get a job."
A helicopter came into veiw. It hovered over us and a bright, beaming light shown down at us.
"This is S.W.A.T. You are under arrest!"
"I don't think there's going to be a new beginning." James yelled.
Police cars surrounded us, got out, and pointed pistols at us.
"How are we going to get away?" I asked him.
A sly grin came across James's face. "I got an idea."

-Will V.