Lost: Chapter One

It was late one night in year 3233, when Keith and l were trying to get tickets to Mars. One week later they were driving to Vancouver when l noticed something unusual. Then a bad feeling shot through him. He told his dad to turn the car invisible but it was too late. The road gang had already pulled them over. One had a phishniak (a nuclear laser guns) and one told us “hold your hands up in the air or I’ll send you there.” I was too quick for him. I pulled a tazer out and a force field came around us. I killed one of them. The others were too scared of me. I heard on the radio that there is a prospector on Mars and he thinks he saw an alien. When we arrived in Vancouver we took of immediately. We landed on Mars an hour later. I saw a part of the Mars Rover. When we had our tour we went to the Mall. I bought a laser gun just in case. My dad got a phishniak. We went to explore unexplored land. Just then I saw a green thing buzz by. A bad feeling shot through me.