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Melodies of the Night Chapter 1

Melodies of the Night Chapter 1

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by Stardream
in Where the girls are always mean-er (oh-oh)

A/N: Since this is a new gerne for me, I want to know how I'm doing, so please comment! Enjoy!

*Charlotte*

October 3, 1893

I was in the middle of some very boring paperwork that had to do with the damage I had caused to a building during the pursuit of a criminal when the phone rang.

"Hello Charlotte Steckler here." I said in boredly into the speaker. "Who is this?"

"Charlotte, this is Henry. We have a situation at the Gress mansion." My assistant informed me.

"Got it. I will be over there as soon as I can." I tried to hang up the phone to keep it up, but it kept falling down. After several attempts, I rushed over to my coat, put it on, and hurried out the door. Boring paperwork from the police would have to wait. 

******

"Oh dear Lord." I gasped, looking at Rebecca Gress. She was beautiful, even in death. Her blonde hair glimmered in the sun rays that managed to escape the fog, and her facial expression was one of pure calm, even though I was sure she was anything but calm as she fell from the roof. The only thing out of place was the puddle of blood behind her head.

"Yes, Charlotte. This is one of the more bloody murders." Henry replied.

"Suicide, Mr. Vincent. Black magic does not exsist." Mr. Vathroder, the chief of police corrected him. "And there is no evidence that someone pushed her off the roof." I turned to Rebecca's parents.

"What happened?" I questioned. "Was she sad at the time?" 

"We have no idea what she was thinking. Mrs. Collins saw her in bed at 11:30, but at the 12th stroke of the Big Ben hitting midnight, we heard her hit the ground." Mr Gress informed us. Mrs. Gress burst into tears. Then, Mr. Vathroder approached us.

"Ms. Steckler, that reminds me. It's been a fortnight since your fines for the damage to the logging factory were due." He said coldly, daring me to give him an explanation.

"Um, I, uh, well ..." I stuttered, trying to think of a valid excuse. Henry then looked at Big Ben.

"Oh dear me! Charlotte, we're 20 minutes late for our meeting." He said in fake shock.

"Yes, I forgot!" I replied. Then, we ran away from Mr. Vathroder and the other police men inspecting the scene. Once we were in an alleyway far away from the Gress mansion, Henry cornered me.

"Charlotte! Don't tell me you've neglected to pay those fines again!" He shouted.

"I was going to do them, but you called." I explained.

"Oh, right. It's my fault you're up to your neck in debts and have failed to pay them." He said sarcasticly.

"Yes, indeed." I smirked. Henry rolled his eyes.

"Let's hurry along now. To make sure you don't forget to do the paperwork, I'll help you with them." He said sternly.

"Oh, Henry, shall we not? In case you've forgotten, I'm 21, not 11." I complained.

"No, we shall, Charlotte, because you're acting immature. Now, let's grab a taxi." Henry cut me off before I could protest. And so, we rode in the taxi in silence.


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Cool! Very suspensive :o The

Cool! Very suspensive :o The main character sounds very interesting, and I want to know more about her as a reader. Dying for more! ^^

 

(Get it? Dying...? Okay, nvm. I'm lame. xD)

Dying for more! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

 

~*Serenity*~

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Posted by Ashley on Mon, 02/15/2010 - 15:16
Thank you! I promise the

Thank you! I promise the next chapter will be out soon.

izA-"I think she's hypervetalating. Slap her." - Alice, New Moon

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"Always, always have a plan." - Annabeth Chase, Percy Jackson Series

Posted by Stardream, izA,... on Mon, 02/15/2010 - 15:40
Cool! Mysterious but

Cool! Mysterious but awesome! I really like it!

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Posted by Twirlgirl on Mon, 02/15/2010 - 16:19
wow... i was never really

wow... i was never really into mystery until now!!!! ITS REALLY GOOD!!!

 

95% would cry if they saw ROBERT PATTINSON (Edward Cullen - Twilight, New Moon) standing on top of a sky scraper about to jump. If you're one of the 5% who would sit there eating pop corn saying "DO A FRONTFLIP!!" copy this and paste it in your sig

Posted by Halle on Sun, 02/28/2010 - 18:21
Very good! One of the better

Very good! One of the better mystery stories!Cool

                                                                 -Emma

Posted by Emma on Wed, 04/07/2010 - 20:57
Thank you! This is my first

Thank you! This is my first time writing mystery, so that's a big compliment!

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Posted by Stardream on Thu, 04/08/2010 - 15:37
Can't wait to read more!

Can't wait to read more! Great Job! I'm going to read the next

The stories that i'm currently writing, here on kidpub are.... 1. The time- traveler 2. Silence of the Gods PLEASE read them, they are SUPER duper AWESOME

Posted by Rebecca on Wed, 04/28/2010 - 20:13
When did this come up? I've

When did this come up? I've missed it! but I love it!


Insanity is my magic...

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