My World, My Paintbrush- Chapter 8
| by
Marzi! in Maryland |
Chapter 8
I stepped lightly through the door. When my eyes had adjusted to the dim light, I saw a sort of throne room. Sasha, Ben, and Emily were clustered in a corner. As I looked around, Lissy stumbled in behind me.
"You. Boy." Came a deep, cold voice from way above my head. I instinctively looked up. But all I saw was the high, arched ceiling decorated with white-and-gold wallpaper showing scenes too far away to see clearly. I realized that whoever had spoken had thrown their voice. Or maybe they just had a really good PA system.
"Boy! Come here!" Commanded the voice, this time from. I walked uncertainly forward, toward Emily and the others. A man with a twisted, scratched face regarded me closely. Set into his throne thing were lots of glittering stones and jewels. I realized Lissy was following silently behind me, taking care not to step on my heels. I stared right at the man. He stared back. Then he lifted his serpent-shaped staff and everything went black.
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i like it but it would be nice i fmore descriptive
Too short, and needs a little more description.
Lexi! Please read my books: The Girl Who Could Control Fire, Crazy for Dance, Differences, Daughter of Poseidon, Penny, Legends, Peril, Summer Solstice, Shadow Knights, and more! (I think.)
Um... Lexi? Didn't you once write a chapter that was three sentences long? Something in Differences, I think.
"Reach for the stars. Always try harder. Never give up, unless, of course, you are offered ice cream." -Mi (That's meee!) WRITE, NOT FIGHT! HAVE FUN, AND KEEP ON WRITING! -Pokey :)
Too short, and needs a little more description.
Lexi! Please read my books: The Girl Who Could Control Fire, Crazy for Dance, Differences, Daughter of Poseidon, Penny, Legends, Peril, Summer Solstice, Shadow Knights, and more! (I think.)
STOP REPEATING!
and you did wite a 3 sentence long chapter so HA!
-Marzi! WRITE NOT FIGHT!