Oh why, the disguise?~~~A POEM (please read; thanks!)
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NightOwl0_0 (a girl who is in a whirlpool of thoughts; trying to decide who she likes better: Finnick or Peeta *sigh* |
A/N: I think I actually overcame my writer's block/writer's doubt. Wow. That definitely takes some weight off my shoulders. Anyway, I want to apologize for my lack of involvement here on Kidpub. I've been really busy and like I said, I haven't been able to write anything. I really hope you guys like this poem! It kinda just came to me. Nothing great but it's something. Thanks for reading and comments are appreciated!
Oh why, the disguise?
I really can’t say
That I believe everything
That comes out of your mouth
I really can’t say
That you were everything
I thought you were
I really can’t say
I will spend the rest of
My life with you
I really can’t take
You home to my parents
Because I know that
They really can’t see
Through the wall you hide
Your heart behind
I really have no proof
That you would jump in front
Of the bullet, to save me
I really can’t blame them
If they don’t believe the fact
That beneath your disguise
I found love in you
A/N: Eh, what do you think?
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I think..... IT IS AMAZING! Sooooooooo awesome, and really powerful! LOVE IT!!!!
Awww thank you! I'm glad you like it. Have a great night!
----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0
WORDS FAIL ME O____________e
I really have no words to say...
This poem...is...
Simple, sweet, and JUST PLAIN EPIC!!!!!
Awww thank you! That means a lot to me.
----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0
I THINK IT IS AWESOMESAUCEWITHAWESOMESAUCEANDYETMOREAWESOMESAUCEONTOP!
I love the repetitiveness of the
I really can't...
I really can't...
I REALLY CAN'T BELIEVE TIS SO EPYK! XD
~Lauren~
A Picnic up a mountain. A mysterious BANG! And Skylar finds herself in Ancient China...: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/memory-mountainprologue-new-b...
Haha thanks for commenting! :D
----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0
AMAZINGLY AMAZING POEM, as always. ;)
Because I know that
They really can’t see
Through the wall you hide
Your heart behind...
O.0 That part...it's....beautiful!
GREAT JOB! :D
Minor CC: Poem titles have to be capitalized, except for "the", "a", and a few others I can't think of. o_0
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The planet Ectroi is waiting for you...
Thank you so much for commenting, Ash! It means a lot!
----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0