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Oh why, the disguise?~~~A POEM (please read; thanks!)

Oh why, the disguise?~~~A POEM (please read; thanks!)

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by NightOwl0_0 (a girl who is
in a whirlpool of thoughts; trying to decide who she likes better: Finnick or Peeta *sigh*

A/N: I think I actually overcame my writer's block/writer's doubt. Wow. That definitely takes some weight off my shoulders. Anyway, I want to apologize for my lack of involvement here on Kidpub. I've been really busy and like I said, I haven't been able to write anything. I really hope you guys like this poem! It kinda just came to me. Nothing great but it's something. Thanks for reading and comments are appreciated!

Oh why, the disguise?

I really can’t say

That I believe everything

That comes out of your mouth

I really can’t say

That you were everything

I thought you were

I really can’t say

I will spend the rest of

My life with you

I really can’t take

You home to my parents

Because I know that

They really can’t see

Through the wall you hide

Your heart behind

I really have no proof

That you would jump in front

Of the bullet, to save me

I really can’t blame them

If they don’t believe the fact

That beneath your disguise

I found love in you

 

A/N: Eh, what do you think?


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I think..... IT IS AMAZING!

I think..... IT IS AMAZING! Sooooooooo awesome, and really powerful! LOVE IT!!!!

Posted by Margo on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 21:11
Awww thank you! I'm glad you

Awww thank you! I'm glad you like it. Have a great night!

----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (a ... on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 21:19
WORDS FAIL ME

WORDS FAIL ME O____________e

I really have no words to say...

This poem...is...

 

 

Simple, sweet, and JUST PLAIN EPIC!!!!!

Posted by Sailormoon on Tue, 01/31/2012 - 01:20
Awww thank you! That means a

Awww thank you! That means a lot to me.

----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (a ... on Tue, 01/31/2012 - 16:50
I THINK IT IS

I THINK IT IS AWESOMESAUCEWITHAWESOMESAUCEANDYETMOREAWESOMESAUCEONTOP!

I love the repetitiveness of the

I really can't...

I really can't...

I REALLY CAN'T BELIEVE TIS SO EPYK! XD

 

~Lauren~

A Picnic up a mountain. A mysterious BANG! And Skylar finds herself in Ancient China...: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/memory-mountainprologue-new-b...

Posted by La Rondine (Lauren) on Tue, 01/31/2012 - 05:34
Haha thanks for commenting!

Haha thanks for commenting! :D

----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (a ... on Tue, 01/31/2012 - 16:51
AMAZINGLY AMAZING POEM, as

AMAZINGLY AMAZING POEM, as always. ;)

Because I know that

They really can’t see

Through the wall you hide

Your heart behind...

O.0 That part...it's....beautiful!

GREAT JOB! :D

Minor CC: Poem titles have to be capitalized, except for "the", "a", and a few others I can't think of. o_0

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The planet Ectroi is waiting for you...

Posted by TheAshWolf on Tue, 01/31/2012 - 23:43
Thank you so much for

Thank you so much for commenting, Ash! It means a lot!

----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (a ... on Sat, 03/03/2012 - 20:21


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