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Perfection~ A Novel in Verse~ (2) My Fiancée

Perfection~ A Novel in Verse~ (2) My Fiancée

Posted February 21st, 2012 by SaddleAngel

by Hadleigh Philomena
in CT

 

My Fiancée

Charme is
perfect.
Completely
and
perfectly
perfect.

He is kind,
holding my hand
tenderly.
He is secure,
telling me he loves me
when he feels like it.
He is genuine,
his smile making me
smile.
He is loving,
kissing me in public,
sweetly.
He is knowing,
doing what I need,
happily.
He is handsome,
blonde hair, blue eyes,
beautiful.
He is good,
he loves me for who I
am.

He is gentlemanly,
holding doors open for
strangers.
He is kissable,
because he tastes like
peppermint.
He is holdable,
because he wraps me up
so tight.

Charme is perfect,
just because
he
is.


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Wow, this is beautiful!

Wow, this is beautiful! great job!!!! The description...everything....was wonderful!

My favorite lines are:

Charme is
perfect.
Completely
and
perfectly
perfect.

Lol, I don't know exactly why I like it but it's just so flowing and beautiful. Keep writing girl!

----Forever Me, NightOwl0_0

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (a ... on Tue, 02/21/2012 - 14:58
Thank you so much!!(: by the

Thank you so much!!(: by the way did you see the first "chapter?" my parent button isn't working.../:
http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/perfection-novel-verse-1-read...

Posted by ~ForeverMyDraco~ on Tue, 02/21/2012 - 15:02

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