Running From the Forest~ Prologue~ (Mystery/Romance)
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Cream- Puff Cupcake <3 in ecstasy watching AVPM!! |
Smokey rushed through the forest, Jean-Pierre on her heels. As she started to falter from the cramps, Jean-Pierre scooped her up and kept sprinting with his tousled dark brown hair glinting in the firelight. His only consolation was her. If she was lost... he shuddered. No need to think of morbid thoughts.
Suddenly a huge explosion happened in the edge of his vision. He felt the heat blast him backwards. Reeling in the opposit direction he breathed into his shirt. The day he died becuse of smoke inhalation... The dark horse reared above them. Smokey screamed, and started struggling madly to escape, which mad Jean-Pierre clutch her tighter to his chest. Flames crowded his vision. Smokey yelled at him but only 4 words got through. "Put - down - idea - strangle!" He relaxed his grip but she did not quiet down.
"IDEA!" she roared over the crackle and pop of the buring trees. "OK, OK" he said barked as he put her down in the cave they had finally reached.
Among the damp and acrid smell of seafood that was strengthened by the mustard clored moss and algae that hung and clung to the walls. She smiled at him and he softly kissed her forhead. "Now what's this about a plan....?" he asked. She grinned again, brushed her choppy black hair out of her face, cuddled up with Jean-Pierre more-- and told him the plan.
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Ok Hi! This is Cream-Puff Cupcake adn I just wanted to ask if you had any ideas for other names for characters? Any gender. Thanks!
i like it! for names......do you want something unique? what is the personality of the character you need named?i have lots of ideas....
C.C.:
i really enjoyed reading it. i wish there were more! could you lengthen it with more description? i also suggest seperating it into paragraphs- when they move to a new location, someone else speaks, and for suspense are great times to make a new paragraph. it makes it easier to read in bite size pieces.
aside from that, exellentical job! i hope to hear more!
(on my door someday: i m already disturbed. please come in.) Then I went insane with long gaps of horrible sanity. - Edgar Allan Poe
Personalities? one is Very quiet, super shy-- that kind of thing.(girl name?) One is very ridicolously loud and argues alot. One is smart yet not nerdy. Oh and after I send this comment I will edit the prologue and add more detail. :D
great! time to work my naming magic...hmmm....if you don't like what i list, try this website: www.babynamesworld.com.
here goes:
girl #1: violet, celeste (if you say it softly, it souds really cool), Stara (connotation= shy), leia (pronounced Lay-uh.), Lydia, elise, belen
Girl #2: Cassidy, Jessica, rachel, zoe, peyton, Annika, Kate
Girl # 3: kendra, Jenny, Alex, jade, Teddy, Skylar
(on my door someday: i m already disturbed. please come in.) Then I went insane with long gaps of horrible sanity. - Edgar Allan Poe