The Un-Rescued Princess; Chapter 4

by Maryam
in A Land Of Desert And Sun

Scowling, Jolinda rounded the corner of the wagon where the front was and found through the opening, Adair and the man Jeffery arguing ith each other in low voices.
'...Impossible! I mean, look at her!' Adair gestured to the back of the wagon, where Jolinda knew they thought she was. 'She doesn't even need our help! I mean, compare her to Lucy and Adelle. They WANTED to be rescued. They hated their lives. But I do believe this Jomaria girl' - 'Jolinda,' Jeffery said patiently. 'Jolinda, whatever, is the perfect kind of fairytale princess! I swear! I mean, just look at the way she walks, all mincing, and talks, all simpering, and ORDERS US AROUND -' 'Just be patient, Adair,' Jeffery said. 'She may come around.' Silence. Then Adair spoke with an air of finality. 'If Linden can't talk some sense into her, that's it. And I don't think we can wait a whole other year to go back to her city. I suggest we put her back right away. But if you want to keep her a bit, fine. Just don't expect any change.'
With that, he stalked out of the wagon and started leaning against it, thinking.
A few inches (it felt like centimeters) to the right, Jolinda was sitting, glancing up at him now and then, wondering when he'd notice her and walk away, or order her away. She'd go with pleasure.
Before she could inch away, though, he looked down and noticed her, then shook his head and went off inside the woods on the right side of the road.
Jolinda clambered out from under the wagon, sighing in relief.

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This isn;t the end of the chapter, more to come. And tell me if you like it or not! I haven't really been getting any comments!!


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It's great! I really feel

It's great! I really feel like I'm in her world!

"All you need is love."
~The Beatles

very good, keep going!

very good, keep going!

This is really well-wrote!

This is really well-wrote! Right more!!! I also like how it's different from most princess stories!

thank you both! and Marina,

thank you both!
and Marina, can you just explain that? i mean, why you feel you're in her world? :) thanks

I LOVE

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOORAY, ANOTHER CLASSIC BY MARYAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah, distinctly I remeber it was in the bleak December/ And each seperate dying ember/ Wrought it's ghost upon the floor
~Edgar Allen Poe

THANK YOU!!! honestly, cama,

THANK YOU!!! honestly, cama, you make my day!

I'm not Marina, but I think

I'm not Marina, but I think I know what she means by 'in her world'.
You write the story so well I know exactly what everyone is thinking. It's as if I AM Jolinda, and I AM experiencing her adventure.
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Once again you have struck a

Once again you have struck a higher standard than last, please ca you comment on some of my works especialy Christan or Angeliss, keep on checking back on chapters to see my comments.

i'm not usually up for this

i'm not usually up for this kind of stuff but its got my attion.

~ Sing like theres no tomarrow. Dance like no ones watching. Speak like no ones there. In other words express yourself. ~


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