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When The Clock Strikes Twelve - Chapter 10

When The Clock Strikes Twelve - Chapter 10

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by DarkAlias (Jack D)
in the dark side of the moon, rockin out with Pink Floyd

Hi everyone!!!! This is the very last chapter so please read and comment, okay? I really hope you all enjoyed When The Clock Strikes Twelve and watch out because I'm thinking of writing a sequel...

Chapter 10

    I took one quick glance at Edward and raced out after Fern. She was sprinting down the lawn, cackling manically. I saw a dark Rolls Royce parked on the drive and realized that she making a break for the car. “I don’t think so!” I thought and upped my pace.

    “You’ll never catch me!” screamed Fern and I knew she was right. She was far ahead of me and I would never have enough time to catch up with her. Reality kicked in and slowed down to a jog, knowing that it was no use running.

    Suddenly a dark figure stepped out in front of Fern and she went crashing into them. They landed in a heap on the wet, dew-covered lawn where Fern sat, fumbling with the big stack of money. I saw my chance of catching her and sprinted forward.

    Once I reached the confused and panicky Fern I realized who the figure was. There was Viola staring up at me, smiling. Her once beautiful, scarlet dress was ripped, torn and caked in mud. “Hello,” she said dumbly and I laughed. Together we took Fern by the arm and restrained her from running away until Edward arrived with Inspector Jenkins. Jenkins took and pair of handcuffs from his pocket and clasped them around Fern’s wrists.

    Edward stared dumbly at Viola. “W-Where were you?” he stammered. “I t-thought you were gone forever!” Before she had time to answer he had his arms around her, whispering,” I’ll never let go of you again.” I smiled warmly and relaxed my shoulders which I realized had been really tense. I had a feeling things were going to be okay.

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    After the reunited Edward and Viola had had their share of kisses and hugs we went back to the lounge so that I could explain the whole thing. There were some gasps when I told everyone about Fern going out with Edward and wanting revenge for leaving her and when I finished Mom gave me a huge hug and told me how brave I was.

    Viola then stood up and explained how Fern had taken her and dumped her down the wishing well in the garden. She was left to die, even if Edward paid the ransom. Viola and spent a lot of time wondering and thinking how she would get out until Lady Ivory came strolling by and helped her get out, only moments ago. Edward thanked Lady Ivory deeply and gave her a cheque for a thousand pounds reward for helping Viola.

    The money Fern took was returned to Edward and I was given a share for my ‘efforts’. Fern was later escorted to local police station by Inspector Jenkins and we were invited to the court hearing that would be held a week later. Really there was no doubt that Fern would be proven guilty and sent to prison which I was truly glad about.

    I stood out in the gardens not a lot later, watching the sunrise and thinking it all over. The orange haze reflected off the lake, making it all the more beautiful. Edward joined me a few minutes later and patted me on the back. “You did a good job, kid,” he said gratefully and I smiled.

    "Thanks," I said lightly, turned and walked back into the heavy warmth of the house. Things were going to be alright.

 

The End


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YAYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YAYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE ENDING!!! THIS IS AMAZING! GOOD WRITING AND I HOPE THAT I DO SEE A SEQUAL!!!!!

 

Kay - My books are Expectations, Two Tears, and The Visionary

Posted by Kay on Sun, 06/13/2010 - 10:17
:) When life gives you

:)

When life gives you lemons make grapejuice and then step back and let people wonder how you did it!

Posted by Jack D on Mon, 08/09/2010 - 03:30
Yeah! That was great! I'm

Yeah! That was great! I'm off for the sequel now!

Imagination stays alive.

Posted by S.Z. Aquila on Wed, 07/14/2010 - 11:05
The End? THE END? NO, THERE

The End? THE END? NO, THERE CAN'T BE A "THE END", YOU CRAZY, MENTAL PERSON, YOU!!! Oh yeah. There's a sequal. Never mind...

A wise person once said, "What if everyone else in the world is weird and I'm the normal one?............ Nah, not likely." That wise person was none other than MEEEEE!!!! 8D

Posted by Shelby on Sun, 08/08/2010 - 10:50
HAHA!! Glad you like it!!

HAHA!! Glad you like it!! You know, the book swap was only for the first book!! You can read the others if ya wanna but I probably won't get to read a second of your books cuz I'm really busy...

When life gives you lemons make grapejuice and then step back and let people wonder how you did it!

Posted by Jack D on Sun, 08/08/2010 - 15:16
Yay people like it!! When

Yay people like it!!

When life gives you lemons make grapejuice and then step back and let people wonder how you did it!

Posted by Jack D on Mon, 08/09/2010 - 03:30
I like it and the rest of

I like it and the rest of the trilogy! My only CC that I can remember right now, is that the gum on a stick thing is a little cliche(I think. I saw it on TV once.), maybe he makes an electromagnet? Like he has some wire and a battery in his pocket, and he uses them to make a magnet.

"You can't always expect my usual brand of stupidity. I like to mix it up, keep you on your toes." -Patrick Star

“Sanity and happiness are an impossible combination.” -Mark Twain

Posted by L.S.Trendom on Sun, 10/17/2010 - 20:17
THANKS!! Yeah, a lot of

THANKS!! Yeah, a lot of these series was pretty cliche..... I think I might edit em......

Posted by Jack D on Mon, 10/18/2010 - 13:10
YES! Edit them! I want to

YES! Edit them! I want to read them again! These are good! But when they are edited! They will be better! MORE MURDER AT MIDNIGHT TRILOGY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"You can't always expect my usual brand of stupidity. I like to mix it up, keep you on your toes." -Patrick Star

“Sanity and happiness are an impossible combination.” -Mark Twain

Posted by L. S. Tredom on Mon, 10/18/2010 - 13:29
Um...  I think I'll have to

Um...  I think I'll have to write another review.

EEEEEK AMAZINGEPICAHH!

"Fearless is not the absence of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death." -Taylor Swift

Posted by ForeverMyDraco on Wed, 01/19/2011 - 11:49
I never had time to read

I never had time to read this, but now I do... and this is AMAZING! LOVE IT!!! It's wonderful, fantastic, a great mystery story!

I knew it was Fern!!!!!!!!!!

I <3 Hip Hop Music!

GIVE ME ALL YOUR COOKIES!!!

Posted by Notes of Music on Wed, 03/23/2011 - 16:57
Awww, thanks! This was

Awww, thanks! This was actually the very first book I ever posted on KP (like a year ago...) nI've gottemn WAY better since then, and have editred this whole book... Dunno if I'll post the edited version tghough.... Anyways, thanks!

Chandler: Stay... stay. Good fake dog! -Friends

Phoebe: My mom used to stick her head in the oven. Actually she only did it the once, but it was pretty weird. -Friends

Posted by Jack D on Thu, 03/24/2011 - 11:24
I have one thing to say to

I have one thing to say to you, Jack...

POST IT OR YOU'RE KICKED OUT OF BEING SG'S EDITOR!!  lol thats probably not punishment, and i'm joking ;-)

Ohhh, gosh, I'll give you more later today.  Once I type it up- I'm almost writing chapter 4, but...  I don't know, I might discontinue it.  Not sure...

BUT POST ITTT!

--FMD

Check. Your. Email.!!

"It's do or die time." --Kyle, Top Shot, Season 2

Posted by ForeverMyDraco on Thu, 03/24/2011 - 11:48


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