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When The Clock Strikes Twelve - Chapter 9

When The Clock Strikes Twelve - Chapter 9

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by DarkAlias (Jack D)
in the dark side of the moon, rockin out with Pink Floyd

Hi!!!! This is the second last chapter to my book so I really hope you enjoyed it!!!! And don't forget: COMMENT!!!!

Chapter 9

    I raced through the manor’s corridors, hoping that I wasn’t lost, searching for Edward. “I have to tell him about Fern before he pays that ransom!” I screamed inside my head. I checked my watch. 11:50pm. “Hurry!”  At last I crashed into Dad while I was hurrying down a corridor on the first floor.

    “Wow, slow down!” said Dad. “I was just coming to look for you!”

    “Where’s Edward?” I panted. “I have to tell him something!”

    Dad’s face fell. “Um, you can’t talk to him right now. Maybe later.”

    “Why, where is he?” I asked quizzically. “I really need to talk to him!”

    “He’s gone to pay a ransom note that was left for him,” explained Dad. “It says that if he pays the money then they’ll give Viola back.”

    “NO!” I yelled. “He can’t pay that ransom! I know who took Viola!” With that I pushed Dad out of the way and darted down the hallway in the direction of the entrance hall where he was to pay the ransom. I heard Dad shouting at me to stop but I kept going.

    I burst into the entrance hall a moment later and saw Edward in the centre of the room, a huge stack of money in his hand. “STOP!!!” I screamed so loud that I felt the room shake. “YOY CAN’T PAY THE RANSOM!”

    He turned and looked at me with confusion. “Why?” he cried. “I have to get Viola back!” I saw the pain in his eyes, the longing to have his wife back in his arms.

    “I know who took her!” I yelled. “It was Fern! I’ll explain later but we have to stop her!” Suddenly there was a cackle from the far side of the room. There was Fern, lurking in the shadows. She stood out into the light of the chandelier.

    “How did you get out of that cell, you little brat?!?” she shrieked. “Actually it doesn’t matter now because my plan has already worked! Edward, hand me that money and I’ll give you my wretched sister back.”

    Edward stood still, totally stunned. “N-No!” he cried. “You won’t get away with this! Inspector Jenkins! Inspector Jenkins! Come here!” He cupped his hands around his mouth and yelled desperately.

    “I don’t think so!” shrieked Fern. She dashed forward, snatched the money right out of Edward’s hands and burst through the front doors into the cool night air.


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NO NO! SHE CANNOT GET AWAY

NO NO! SHE CANNOT GET AWAY WITH THIS!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH - really good chapter btw!

 

Kay - My books are Expectations, Two Tears, and The Visionary

Posted by Kay on Sat, 06/12/2010 - 14:31
OMG I JUST READ ALL THE

OMG I JUST READ ALL THE CHAPTERS AND I HAVE BEEN LIKE SCREAMING MY HEAD OFF AND GOING CRAZY THE WHOLE TIME!!!

Jack, this is the most amazingest thing ever and i love it!!!!!!!!!! I AM TOTALLY ADDICTED!! I NEED MORE!!!

You are such a good writer!!! It takes skill to do a mystery novel!!! Is this the last chapter though???? Becuase isn't there a sequel????

Please comment because i want to know if this is the end or not!!!

But anyways, this was SOOOOO good and i LOVE it!!!

TOTALLY ABSOLUTELY POSITUTELY AWESOME JOB!!!

Posted by LightningBolt on Sun, 06/20/2010 - 15:03
Yeah there should be another

Yeah there should be another chapter! Chapter 10's the last though... I'm SO glad you like it!!!! If you're looking for the next one just type it into the search box and it should work!

When life gives you lemons make grape juice then step back and let people wonder how you did it.

Posted by Jack D on Sun, 06/20/2010 - 15:09
Oh my gosh....OMPJ, this is

Oh my gosh....OMPJ, this is craziness! I'm so...hyped! and I still have the rest to read! More more more! I'm off! Whew!

Imagination stays alive.

Posted by S.Z. Aquila on Wed, 07/14/2010 - 11:01
*I swing in on a vine and

*I swing in on a vine and snatch money out of Fern's hands* "Oh no you don't, you little mess!!!! On to chapter tennnn!!!!!!!!!!

A wise person once said, "What if everyone else in the world is weird and I'm the normal one?............ Nah, not likely." That wise person was none other than MEEEEE!!!! 8D

Posted by Shelby on Sun, 08/08/2010 - 10:43
Dang...Fern is one crazy

Dang...Fern is one crazy woman? Possibly because she was named after some random plant while Viola was named after the most awesomtastical stringed instrument of all time?

"Like a top, like a plaything, the earth spins around"--Me, from Twisting the World

Posted by Clarissa on Sat, 10/23/2010 - 10:01
Hehe!! Yeah, she's pretty

Hehe!! Yeah, she's pretty wacko in the heado!!

Posted by Jack D on Sat, 10/23/2010 - 10:03
OMPJ, this is ahhhhhhh... *I

OMPJ, this is ahhhhhhh...

*I screamed myself hoarse in the other comments and at a Huskies-Nova game Monday...*

"Fearless is not the absence of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death." -Taylor Swift

Posted by ForeverMyDraco on Wed, 01/19/2011 - 11:47


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