when men were men. chapter five (please comment)

by Jack in British Columbia

“well better start a fire to cook this meat”

Matthias said to himself as he scanned the shore, and got some dry drift wood , and then light a fire by rubbing
Two sticks together, Matthias looked across the ocean and saw the most beautiful sunset he had ever seen bright red was shining on the clouds and trees, after about 20 minutes of enjoying the sunset he had finished all the venison,
I wonder what’s taking George so long Matthias thought if he’s not back in half an hour I’ll go looking for him, to help pass time Matthias went into the forest
“ahh”

Matthias yelled as he ducked from a bat
“oh its just bat”

“why should I be afraid of a little bat”

He continued walking into the forest dodging bats the whole way, he cut a young sapling, and ran out of the forest and back to the warmth of the fire he pulled out his dagger and whittled a flute, and then played tunes as he watched the sunset, and then after some time of playing the flute, it had been half an hour and the sun was still setting,
So Matthias got up and set off in the direction that George had gone. Matthias used his sword to hack his way through the vines that grew everywhere in the ever darkening forest, then he heard noises drums and stomping feet he turned the corner of a bush, and saw a whole tribe of people they were dancing in a circle, and inside of the circle stood George he was tied from head to toe, with vine they were chanting words in another language, Matthias saw the fear in Georges eyes and then he realized what the Indians were going to do, they were going to sacrifice George to there God, the Indians led George with their spears up several big stone steps that had so many cracks that made Matthias wonder how the steps where still standing, but then Matthias looked to the top of the steps there was a golden table Matthias knew what this was for. he franticly tried to think of an idea to save Georges life, none came to mind the only thing he could do was to try to battle the Indians until he could untie George and then he would have to escape the tribe, then he looked to see the tribe chief put George on the gold table and lift a knife above his head if Matthias was going to do something he had to do it NOW, Matthias jumped out from behind the bush and drew his sword the Indians looked at Matthias and then charged him leaving George tied on the table, George then tried to reach his golden dagger to cut himself free he finally after the third try he got it and started to cut the thick vines at last he had cut himself free and then he jumped into battle against the Indians, the Indians were throwing their spears at Matthias he dodged left and right and then jumped into the crowd of Indians sword first, hot into the battle George shouted “THANKS FOR HELPING ME OUT!!”

“NO PROMBLEM,NOW WE JUST HAVE TO ESCAPE!!

“YEAH MATTIAS THAT’S THE HARD PAR…AHHH THEY GOT ME IN THE LEG”
“ HOLD ON GEORGE I’M ALMOST THERE”
Matthias was a fighting machine he made his way jabbing stabbing through the tribe, to where George was fighting but George was getting tired and was bleeding badly, Matthias got there just in time a indain was just about to stab George with his spear, Matthias wacked the him flat.

“George I don’t think we’re going to survive”

Matthias said out of breath

“I guess your right Matthias”

George said as he franticly looked for a way to escape, then as he looked he saw the chief he was yelling things to his tribe, and that’s when George realized what he had to do, George ran limping up the stone steps to where the chief was standing and started fighting him, he ducked when the chief tried to stab him in the head George took his chance he slashed the chiefs legs, he gave a yelp of pain then George grabbed the cheifs spear and through it into the bushs, then he grabbed the chiefs hands and held them tight and then he put the knife up to the cheifs throat,

“call off your tribe or you will die”

George yelled into the cheifs ear, the chief did not understand what George had said he just stood there waiting for George to kill him,

“he doesn’t understand English George”

Matthias yelled

“then what should we do “
George yelled back

“I know, just keep that dagger to his throat”

Matthias yelled and then ran to the drums that were on the ground BONG!!!!! Matthias hit the drum the Indians who had started fighting among there selves all looked at him, Matthias pointed to George the Indians looked at there chief and started getting angry,

“what are you doing Matthias you just made them even more angry”

“please George follow along on what I am trying to do”

“okay”

Then Matthias walked up to George and made a motion with his hand for the Indians to come closer he shook his head the Indians understood then George shoved the chief forward and then slowly walked down the steps and took off into the bush, the Indians ran to there chief, there chief then started yelling orders to kill George and Matthias