A Draco Malfoy Love Story
Posted January 1st, 2012 by Alexa10
A Book Review by Ernesto
in Koplemento, CA
I have recently read a Draco Malfoy Love Story by ForeverMyDraco. In my opinion it was very well written. Just one problem. It was just a tiny bit confusing, which made you're rating drop down to a 4. The story is amazing to me. You made me think of Draco Malfoy in a whole different way. Harry was very different. I liked how you made a new character out of you're imagination, Zoe Campbell that was well thought out. Draco almost seems NICE in this chapter book. You used descriptive words, and made me feel like I was actually right next to Draco himself. Well done, ForeverMyDraco!
This will be featured in the next issue of the Daily Prophet!
I also liked your spin-off, Pick a Pic. It was intresting you made Draco have a sister and talk about Colin Creevy, the sometimes annoying picture-taker.
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Awwwww thank you so much!! This is awesome, thank you!! :D As for the confusing part, I completely get you. A lot of the chapters are......Once I have time and have finished, I'm going to go back and extreme edit everything and try to publish it on Amazon Kindle Storefront :) I hear it's either free or close to it...:) Hahaha! The Daily Prophet thing made me laugh so hard!! :) And thank you about PaP! :) It's going to be so much fun with that....:)
THANK YOU!!!
~ForeverMyDraco
Why can't you see how your every move has me strugglin' for breath/Comin' up for air/Do you even care how I feel?/'Cause this crush can't be real/Unless you notice/How, in every moment/I'm wishin' we were somethin'/But I'm hangin' onto nothin' with you ~M