Halo (First chappy)
Posted August 31st, 2010 by writer97
in love with reading and writing)
Hey Kidpubbers! I just read an amazing first chapter of Kyle's new book, Halo! It is so amazing, the details he put in this story was amazing too! more like magnificent, you know how you can't really describe something truly amazing it words, I really can't! It's like you read the book, it get's put into your mind, and you know exactly why you love that story but you can't seem to put your finger on it when you write something like a review. All I can say is this is amazing and that you should read and comment. Kyle appreciates comments, don't we all??? This is an amazing first chapter! Why do I keep saying that? I gotta stop, anyway this story is a must-read, there is only ONE chapter out so far look on the homepage!!!!
IMMAVampirediariesfan! just reviewed something
"Really?" Eli said sarcastically.
If you don't know who Eli is...I recommend reading Camp Haven by Kyle another amazing story!
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I like the "IMMAVampireDIARIESFan just reveiwed something..." things at the end. Hm...what owuld you put at the end if you reveiwed Equinox? By the way, great reveiw. I like how you described how you can't describe it.
*{I keep trying to kidnap Jasper, but every time, Alice is at the window with a baseball bat, waiting for me. How does she kn--ohh, right.}*