Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part 1.
Posted January 30th, 2012 by Alexa10
A Book Review by Ernesto
in Koplemento, CA
Harry Potter strikes back in his best, and final movie. It starts out with Harry leaving his home, 4 Privet Drive, the place where his aunt and uncle had lived. After a emotional moment where Harry looks at his old toys, Moody comes in with various other people(Shacklebolt, Hagrid etc....), and everyone takes a Polyjuice potion to turn into Harry.
All the people head onto broomsticks, and head off. Just then, Death Eaters take charge, shifting especially Fred/George Weasley.
You'll have to find out more!
Original Cast: Daniel Radcliffe, Emma Watson, Rupert Grint, Ralph Fiennes, Alan Rickman, and various other people.
This was a pretty great movie. Watch it! You'll love it!
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You didn't give much detail in why you liked it, and I don't think it was a good idea to just give away the beginning of the movie. I have a question also: What do you mean by "shifting especially Fred/George"? It doesn't make sense, what you're saying.
Plus, if you're going to list the cast--which you don't even need to do--you can't just say "and various other people" at the end. Well, this is better than your review about Horizon Milk.
Now, you can start debating on if I'm evil and a bully or not. Have fun!
P.S. Deathly Hallows Part 1 isn't the last movie.
I do have to agree with Mary; you didn't really describe why you liked the movie, or what made it a good movie or anything else. Try to be more detailed, and instead of giving away the first part of the movie, talk about what made it a good movie.
~Kat Warson Holly
"Me fail English? That's unpossible." -The Simpsons
I
love that movie me and my dad watched it and loved it!!!