JANE BY DESIGN
Posted January 16th, 2012 by JEH2000
A Book Review by JJ
in California
JANE BY DESIGN IS A GREAT SHOW FOR KIDS 11-16
THIS IS ABOUT A GIRL (JANE QUIMBY) WHO HAS NEVER FIT IN AND FOLLOWS HER DREAMS TO BECOME A FASHION DESIGNER ALONG WITH HER BEST FRIEND.
SHE BEGINS HER JOURNEY BY WORKING AS AN ASSISTANT FOR GRAY A FASHION DESIGNER. MANY THINGS HAPPEN ALONG THE WAY.
WATCH IT ON ABC FAMILY ON TUESDAY NIGHTS!
THIS SHOW GIVES INSPIRATION TO PEOPLE WHO WANT TO FOLLOW THERE DREAMS
-JJ
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An interesting review, but some CC:
You made some grammatical errors. Such as the last line; it should be 'their' instead of 'there'. Along with that, it should be 'inspiration', not 'insperation'. You also need to add some punctuation at the end of your sentences.
Also, this is just a personal preference, but perhaps you could write without caps lock on? It gives me the idea that you are shouting. :P