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With the Stroke of Ink

With the Stroke of Ink

Posted August 26th, 2010 by K.R.Galvin

A Book Review by Kyle
in My daydreams, thinking of Toph kicking Di-Lee agents butts to save me from falling off a cliff. Oh Toph! :D

Author: 
Kay
Rating: 
4

This book is AMAZING! Even though it only has four chapters up and is still developing, which is why I gave it a four, I think that the characters are interesting, the writing is solid (as usual since Kay wrote it!), the plot is intriguing, and you can always rely on this story for a good read! So far, it is telling the story of Paige, a girl who describes her life as terrible, and she wishes to forget all about it, but hopes to save it by writing it out and hopefully, she can save herself with the stroke of ink. The first chapter tells Paige kicking her abusive father out of her home when they find out her father had been cheating on Paige's mom. In the next chapter, three years after the beginning, Paige's mom is re-married to a gentle, kind, and caring man, Paige is preparing to leave for college. Paige decides to have one more look around the farm with her dog Pepper. In chapter 3, she leaves for college, and tells of how sad she was to be leaving the only home she'd ever had. In chapter 4, the reader leanrs that the judge has given Paige's father the permission to have Paige stay with him since the college is near his house. Paige hates the ruling and is prepared to be mean and hateful towards her father and cruel and cold to her step-mother. I really hope Kay takes this already amazing story and gives it an amazing storyline and conclusion. Once again, another brilliant masterpiece by our very own Kay! I actually hope that Kay might actually agree to turn her story into a script since I love it sooooo much! But anyway, amazing book, good read it RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Kay, no pressure or anything, but keep up the awesome writing and make sure to post many chapters of ALL of your stories on your birthday (October 10th) since that is when you will officially re-post your stories again!


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OH.ME.GOSH - That was

OH.ME.GOSH - That was amazing Kyle!! THANK YOU!!! And I have already started writing With The Stroke of Ink again - in fact, I am just waiting to have a few chapters with me till I post it! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! THIS MEANS SO MUCH TO ME!!! :) Again, thank you for everything!

 

 

~Kay

Posted by Kay on Thu, 08/26/2010 - 16:29
YES! Kay, that story is

YES! Kay, that story is amazing. :)

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Word domination! You make it sound so unattainable.

~Opal Koboi, Artemis Fowl

Posted by Athena on Thu, 08/26/2010 - 17:00
THANK YOU!!! :D   ~Kay

THANK YOU!!! :D

 

~Kay

Posted by Kay on Thu, 08/26/2010 - 17:03


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