The Girl Who Loved School
by Victoria
There once was a girl who loved school and every time it was lunch time she was sad because it was almost time to leave. She always got in trouble but she still loved school and she was heppy because her mom was the teacher!! She was so happy but one day something happened. She get a note saying "you are so bad in school you are getting EXPELLED!!" She was FURIOUS so she ripped it up into a million peices! She never forgot about that letter because she kept the word "EXPELLED!!" . Then she never smiled again for the rest of her live. (Comment)
that is deep! Never smiled
that is deep! Never smiled again? And I hope this helps: try to put more details in so it doesn't sound like you are skipping from event to event!
wow this is great
wow this is great Victoria
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