THE HAUNTED MANSION

THE HAUNTED MANSION
by ROSA NUNEZ

Elvia was going for a walk. She passed a spooky, spider webbed covered house. “I wonder what could be in the spooky house?” Elvia thought. Elvia was a scared girl. She is 4 feet and 7 inches tall. Her long and straight hair and oval shaped eyes were a light brown. Also she was 9 years old. Elvia was going into the house when just then she saw this white blanket floating. “haaaaaaaaaaa…….” Elvia shouted. Her echo came back to her. She heard a noise behind her. It was like a wind blowing her and telling her to go away. Then she took a step toward the spooky old house. The floor made noises. Crink, crink, crink. Eveything made noises--the walls, chairs, tables, handles. Just then she heard a noise saying, “Elvia go away, please I beg you.” She was so scared that she ran in the room and closed the door shut. Then she started crying and screaming. “Please go away,” said the ghost again. “All I want to know is who are you first and then I will go away. If you don’t tell me who you are I am not going to go away “Elvia hollered. “Are you a monster, man, or a ghost? And if you don’t tell me who you are I am going to find out.” Then Elvia looked everywhere to find another door. There was a door on the left. She. opened it. She was thinking if the voice was a monster or a ghost. All the way to the top of the spooky house, she kept thinking what the voice could be. Just then, she saw 10 ghosts dancing and singing .She yelled “hhhhaaaaa….” Then the ghosts went flying to get Elvia. Elvia jumped from the stairs to the bottom of the stairs and kept running. She ran until she finally got home. “I will never go back in the spooky house ever again in my life!!! I will not pass there again.” Elvia said.

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