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The Haunted Toys R' Us

The Haunted Toys R' Us

Posted July 9th, 2009 by rwwm

The Haunted Toys R' Us
by David Lee

The Haunted Toys R’ Us

By: David Lee

            One stormy night at the Toys R’ Us in New York City, Chally and Muza were wondering through the store. It closed suddenly, and they found themselves locked in with the lights on. They were scared. All of a sudden, the lights turned off, and they started to run. When, out of nowhere, they crashed into a person.

            “What happened?” Chally exclaimed, “Who are you?”

            “I’m...I’m Jaine!” she explained, “And I don’t know what happened. The lights just went out.”

            “Hey! I heard something.” whispered Muza.

            “Shhhh…” said Chally.

            They all looked back, and they saw something holding a black hole. It was a ghost.

            “Wow, I’m going in.” said Chally bravely as he quickly ran and dived into the black hole. As he was swallowed up by the black hole, Chally amazingly found himself outside the Toys R’ Us.

            But, Muza and Jaine were still locked in the store. Out of nowhere, they had an idea. They will build another black hole out of Legos. When it was finished, they got ready to go inside. But as they ran towards the black hole, 400 ghosts burst through.

            “AHHHHHHHH!!!” they screamed. They ran all over the store dodging the scary ghosts one by one by one until the aisle to the black hole was clear of any ghosts. They dashed towards the black hole trying to avoid the ghosts who were closely catching up. They ran faster than a shooting star and leaped through the black hole.

                The bad news is that they were at the Toys R’ Us in Florida. They quickly built another black hole out of Legos. But again, ghosts appeared. But, this time there weren’t 400 ghosts; instead, there were 100,000 ghosts.

                They were chased by the ghosts, and they quickly ran towards the black hole and dived in. When they opened their eyes, Muza and Jaine were finally back home with Chally, and they were safe. Cool

           

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That would be pretty scary

That would be pretty scary if that happened to me and my friends Surprised Good job

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Posted by Besacheezle on Sat, 07/11/2009 - 10:32


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