A Journey in the Woods

A Journey in the Woods
by Zach G.

I was still lying there. I knew because I saw trees and woods. I opened my eyes for the second time and I was in a frosty wonderland. I was lying on an ice table. It was really weird because I was in a frosty wonderland, but it was like 79 degrees outside. I got up and I was walking toward the weaping willow tree and I hit something that wasn't really there. It kind of reminded me about that invisible person, which I didn't really remember anything about. That didn't matter to me right now. What mattered to me right now is that I'm trapped in a box! I kind of felt around and I found a doorknob and I kept turning it and it just kept turning and then the knob popped off. I said to myself, "I'm doomed". I was really mad, so I took a piece of ice that was from the table thing and I bashed it against the door and the door flew open. I was so happy! I found some cool glasses on the ground. They were glasses to see the invisible things. I put them on and I saw a bunch of little creatures. I picked up a rock and I said, "Hey, you JUMBO SHRIMP". The creature became mad. He was darting at me so fast, I didn't know what to do. I figured the only thing I could do was throw the rock at the creature, so I did. The little creature got madder. When he came over I kicked him in the face and he yelled, "Owwwwwww". I screamed and said you threw the rock at me first and I needed payback. We fought some more. I ran away and found a flume. I went into another world. It was weird, but I was safe hopefully.

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