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Jurassic Island

Jurassic Island

Posted April 30th, 2008 by mholmes

Jurassic Island
by Trace Fleeman

As Dr. Eskla was studying germs-cancer, flu, and fever- with his green eyes, he wore glasses and was wearing a long white coat. When a paleontologist-Marvin- walked in he said “Doctor, doctor! We just discovered something amazing!! Come and see!!” he handed him two tickets to and island. It took him 5 hours to get there. Then there, on the floor was a full body with skin, triceratops body. He was amazed. Then he heard a rustle in a tree, then the plane was crushed by tyrannosaurs-live-they were stuck there for forever. Then a man was sitting by a tree. Was pulled in by a claw!! They all ran in the forest “It’s a real Jurassic park,” Dr. Eskla said pulling a microscope out. Something above them cawed. It came down to them. It pulled the microscope out of his hands!!! He went in the forest. He built a hut. The door was made out of wood. He looked out side. There was a T. rex coming near. The dr. armed with a gun, was looking around. The T-Rex was coming! He shot a bullet. The dinosaur smashed his hut. His shelter was destroyed. He found a nesting ground. His money obsessed Assistant took one. After 3 hours, they found a big footprint. Dr. Eskla said, “T. Rex, Male” he was looking at it. Feeling it. Then he heard a terrifying roar. Spinesaurs!! He ducked for shelter. “Oh no!! It just ate Marvin!!” An egg dropped out. The creature took the egg. It left. It wanted the egg. Later that night, they found Marvin’s bones. Still fresh. It still had blood. They looked around. They watched a bird fly. (To tell the truth later it was eaten by a harmed raptor) they looked at constellations. It was great. Dr. Eskla was sound a sleep. But he was woken up by screams. A T. Rex was attacking the campsite! He shot the giant lizard. He heard that a comet was coming. If he can just reverse its path. But how?!?!?!?!? Later Dr. Eskla was building. He was building a model comet. He shot it into the dark blue sky. The sky. He was controlling the comet they got on a raft. He made the comet blow the island up! It was like 100 fire works at the same time. Back at home, he wrote it into a novel. Thousands of people loved it. They turned it into a movie. He was famous. He was like the first man to land on the moon.

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This is amazing, Trace!

This is amazing, Trace!  Great job!  How do you come up with such good stories?

"Fearless is not the absence of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death." -Taylor Swift

Posted by ForeverMyDraco on Mon, 12/27/2010 - 18:31


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