My Brother Saved Me
Posted April 10th, 2008 by jlovello
My Brother Saved Me
by Victoria
Once my brother Paul save me from falling into a sewer. I opened the car door and I didn't know it was next to the sewer so I went out the door and my foot got cought into the sewer and I yelled "HELP ME" and my brother Paul ran and pulled me out. I was only 4 years old at the time and I never knew hot to repay him. I't was the happiest day of my life The End (Comment)
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If I fell in the sewer I'd be thankful too. Nice story. A bit repitive. Try gutter and other words like that.
Homework hurts trees.
Cute story. I would suggest trying a little more detail. Good Job :]