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My Hero

My Hero

Posted April 29th, 2009 by rwwm

My Hero
by Nicolas Lopez

My Hero

By Nicolas

 

My brother Alex inspires me because he is hard working.

He studies hard to achieve high grades.

In fact, he got a 1340 on his SAT test.

Also, he trains hard to compete in sports.

He is one of the captains of his water polo team.

 

Alex definitely qualifies as an outstanding brother.

There is a special bond between Alex and me.

We are friends.

We are not bickering 24/7 like other brothers.

 

 

Alex takes me to the most fun places.

For example, he took me to a picnic with a bunch of his friends.

We played basketball.

He passed it to me dozens of times.

I saw that he was proud of me for shooting the ball.

SWOOSH! He watched with amazement as the ball floated into the hoop.

 

Alex makes me feel safe.

He is like my personal body guard.

With his bulging muscles and six pack he would even scare a robber away.

In fact, Alex has muscles on his muscles.

He is my brother….my hero.

 

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What a great poem! It

What a great poem!

It expresses how much you admire and look up to your brother, and I think that he'd be very proud to read this.

Posted by Oliviaaa(: on Fri, 05/01/2009 - 19:48


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