Rainy Days (Diamante Poem)
Posted February 5th, 2008 by jlovello
Rainy Days (Diamante Poem)
by Mrs. Lovello's Winning Writers
Rain
wet, gloomy,
boring, storming, splashing,
no playing outside today; playing outside today,
shining, blazing, beaming,
bright, hot
Sun
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I understand how you feel about boring rainy days. Today is a beautiful day of sunshine.
Diamante poem? I remember writing one of those once, I can't remember exactly how to do them... I like this, though. :)
Ditto! I hate rainy days!
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~Vanessa:)
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"A good writer write's from their soul..."
"Taking writing away from an author is like taking water away from a fish."
Very cool poem-
this is amazing.
I feel like I'm splashing in puddles!
What's a Diamante poem?
Thank you for the comment.
A Diamante is a diamond shaped poem.
Noun
2 adjectives describing the noun
3 -ing words about the noun
4 words or a short phrase about the noun
3-ing words
2 adjectives
Noun (synonym or antonym of the first noun)
We had fun writing this as a class.
It's nice. Except, I love rain, especially dancing in it :]
Very good poems, I remember writing these in what... 4th grade? Good job!
Wow, your class is intelligent! I love this!
"So our kids won't see a polar bear. I've never seen a dinosaur and you don't see me complaining!"
~Jackson from Hannah Montana
This is Mrs. Walker- what a great class poem! Great job!
I ALWAYS PLAY IN THE RAIN, IT IS FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"So if this is the tongue, then that must be the uvula?" "Ohhh so it's a girl house"
Monster house.