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Summer Time (Draft)(Haiku)
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Summer Time (Draft)(Haiku)

Posted February 12th, 2008 by jlovello

Summer Time (Draft)(Haiku)
by Harrison Gray

Summer time is fun. The sun is shining brightly. It's time for no school!

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good

good

Posted by Jaime on Tue, 02/12/2008 - 14:26
Thanks!

Thanks!

Posted by Jaime on Tue, 02/12/2008 - 14:27
:D-Awsome!

:D-Awsome!

Posted by Jaime on Tue, 02/12/2008 - 14:30
I liked the part about no

I liked the part about no school! Cheyenne

Posted by jlovello on Tue, 02/12/2008 - 16:21
Great Haiku! I love summer

Great Haiku! I love summer too. I tried to fix the spacing. We will keep working with it.
Mrs. Lovello

Posted by Jaime on Tue, 02/12/2008 - 21:55
Wow Harrison I think this

Wow Harrison I think this haiku is really good especially the part about no school. Victoria.

Posted by Jaime on Fri, 02/15/2008 - 17:25
Harrison I think you should

Harrison I think you should try to fix the spacing but everything else is fine ~Victoria~

Posted by Jaime on Sat, 03/08/2008 - 09:48


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