Track
Posted May 14th, 2009 by rwwm
Track
by Jared
TRACK
by Jared Saifman
Speed,
The only thing going through your mind.
Your legs warming up.
The ref,
Anxiously waiting to shoot the gun.
‘’ Boom’’ the gun was launched.
Your legs were let free,
They’re moving,
As fast as a bird just let out of a cage.
The leader of the pack,
Emerges behind the other competitors.
But they will not give up,
They try to sneak up on the leader,
Like a snake with it’s prey.
The finish line approaching,
No one left in despair,
Pushing yourself to the limit,
While the checkered pavement,
Zooms right past your hands.
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Hi, my name is Caleigh. I am a member of KP, and I have madde it my duty to comment on classroom work. So, let me comment!
I LOVE this poem! There is so much imagination, and I loved how you worked similes into your poems.
I'll definitely be expecting good things from this impressive classroom. :)
Keep writing!
Caleigh