Month of July, 2005

EllyMae

Hey, are you not writing anymore of "The Angel Experience"? Because it was really good and I liked it, but you stopped at chapter eight.

Feanix - part twenty-six

Feanix raced across the droubt land, praying that he wouldn't be spotted.

Faces In The Crowd; 5

I couldn't take it; I lifted my bedroom window and climbed out of the house.

Faces In The Crowd; 4

I decided to go to a psychiatrist and see if they knew anything about it.

Adrial: Part Two

Before the silver sliding door opened, the room was flooded with light.

Shelby

No, I don't mean >.

Adrial: Part One

There was only one thing I cared about before the Protian War.

Shelby

I read the next three chapters of "Candle Light".

Shelby

Glad you liked "Guardians".

Candle Light; 7 Freaky Cave

I walked over to Tala and rolled her over so I could see her.

Candle Light; 6 Avalanche

The woman slapped the dogs with a whip.

Candle Light;5 Snowboarding, Not in That Much Danger?

I finally couldn't take it anymore, I was too tired to continue, so I made my way to a tree and peeled a giant piece of bark off and used it to stand on.

Hey guys!

I found this website it is really good for writing though I can't remember the title, and it is FREE!.

to every one

I'm not back, but i am in Jamiaca! This is just a one time post and i won't be able to post much whiole i'm here.

Oops

Did I put he was her sister? Well, I meant She is his sister, it was written in a bit of a hurry.

Candle Light;4 It's All Down Hill From Here

Sorrowful, I continued my journey to the west, scanning every inch of the mountain as best as I could.

Kati

Hey, your revised prologue is good, but one part confuses me:

With open eyes, the girl realised the boy was her sister.

Candle Light;3 Darkness Engulfing

We traveled for miles until about noon, then we slept.

Candle Light; 2 Hunt Out

I rushed inside to tell my mother and father.

Prologue

The sky was red, an omen of bad days to come.

Guardians 2: Chapter Two

Two

It was not long before Arin, Jiya, and Coria reached a small section of the road cleared of surrounding trees, but by then it was night.

Learners of Magic: Episode Two: Eagle Eyes, Part One

Josephine crept down the stairs.

Shelby

I want you to continue with your "Candle Light" story.

Kristy's Pokemon Adventures #7: The Battle, Part One

Brian leapt from Dragoner's back, landing smoothly on both feet.

hmm...

Everyone else seems to have no trouble getting on the forums.

Randomly...

Quisquam quicquid
Noerasne Romanus?

**************
Translation:
Anyone at all,
Do you know Latin/Roman?

I'm not so good at it myself.

Simply a Writing Tutorial: Part One

Man, you must think I'm copying everyone else who is writing a writing tutorial, huh? Well, I am, for fun, of course.

Kati and Barron

Hmm.

another work of art by Cassi

The Sea

You can see the ocean from my summer home.

To Kati and Lauren

Hmm .

Forum

phpBB : Critical Error

Could not open template config file

DEBUG MODE

Line : 326
File : /home/perryd/www/kidpub/phpBB2/includes/functions.

Barron

I know, it doesn't let me on either.

Forums

Am I the only one that's unable to log into the chat room/forum/whatever? I've tried since my membership came through, but no luck.

Lauren

Hmm.

Kati (again)

I think we posted at the same time, weird.

Candle Light;1 Dark, Cold, Winter Night

(Don't expect me to finsh this, I was just in the mood to write something like this and probably won't want to finish it later)

I sat in my chair in the dark, cold winter night.

Lauren (again)

That is my friend, Sarah.

Lauren

Hey, you have some really good stories.

Kati

They deleted it again!
And AGAIN.

:P

Lauren, try posting it again.

T_T

T_T

COME ON PPPLES!! POst!.

My Guide to Defeating Writer's Block

Okay, I just thought of this so it might nit make sense, but it works for me!

1.

Lauren

What a good poem! I personally love oldies, and I think that realy is good.

A Love Poem (Beware...)

Smile one last time
For me
May joy be
In that smile
Always
Smile
To make me
Laugh forever
Smile
I’ll think of you at night.

Untitled: Chapter Two

Chapter Two

Sara's mother drove up in her white Volvo.

Faces In The Crowd; 3

Once again, yelling and anger and smashing glass, two people screaming this time, pain, horror, and something else was there, some kind of smell.

Faces In The Crowd; 2

Someone yelled, smashing glass, screaming and crying, pain and anger.

Kati

It sounds great! Somehow I have a very good feeling about this.

Untitled:Chapter One

This is the same story as Prologue, so read my story titled Prologue first.

Kati

I think you have a really good idea.

Prologue

The sky was red.

A little Note

Hey everyone! I haven't been posting lately, but now I am finally out of that very frustrating phase of WRITER'S BLOCK, that I'm sure we have all experienced.

Wait a Second...

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Erp *clang*clikclik*Pow*snapsker*sqwak*.

Faces In The Crowd; 1

My name is Safire, and I was a homeless girl living on the streets, until a married couple found me sleeping in there barn and took me in.

Kaser Triplets and the Alien Island

Chapter1.

Barron

You haven't replied to me latley on e mail, so I'm hoping you'll get this.

Here I am:Chap.8 Return (last chapter)

He told her, "I seen you running and knew you were going to jump.

Nothing

Type or paste your story in this box.

Here I am:Chap.6 Green Tea

She was riding her bike down a highway, when she heard a vehicle treading behind her.

Here I am:Chap.5 Book Reading

When she finally arrived, she was in Springfield.

Shelby

Your "Here I am" book is really good.

Story I wrote when I was 9 (kind of long)

CHAPTER ONE

I’m a pretty normal fourteen-year-old kid.

Guardians 2: Chapter One

One

Fourteen-year-old Arin stood by his companions, Jiya and Coria.

To everyone

This is the last post I'll be making for awhile.

Guardians 2: Introduction

Arin used to be a fourteen-year-old boy that lived peacefully in a village.

Guardians: Chapter Twelve (last chapter)

Twelve

“Kren!” exclaimed Arin.

Here I am:Chap.4 Tony

She never fell asleep, the pain was too much to just fall asleep with.

Here I am:Chap.3 To The Hospital

She rode for miles and miles and was tired, but knew if she was to get away, she'd have to keep going.

Shelby

Ohhhh.

Shelby

I wasn't giving you the silent treatment, nor do I want to end our friendship.

Here I am:Chap.2 No Longer

She wore a black sweater and black baggy jeans so she could use her hood to cover her face in case her parents had the cops search for her.

Lauren

Yeah, I'm going to make it kind of a surprise and put what she was saying later in the story.

Shelby

A what? You said in your story, "I am no longer a .

Here I am: Chap.1 Dear Mom and Dad,

Here I stand and here I lay,
Here I go and here I stay.

Guardians: Chapter Eleven

Eleven

Arin drew his sword.

EllyMae

I tried reseting it.

so many questions, but i get no answers

i wrote this in a state of confusion.

to everyone

I am going on holiday and won't be back until august the 8th, so you'll have to wait for the next bits to all my stories.

Angel (poem, well, sort of poem)

Angel, your face has captured me,
i was blind but now i see,
eyes of laughter, love and light,
you are my moon in the dark of night.

Silraen, part five

Chapter Five

Rider was not in a good mood after the search party left.

Oops!

Don't get confused when you see the About the Author section for me.

EllyMae

This is Cassi.

Guardians: Chapter Ten

Ten (sorry that it's taken so long to post chapter nine and ten.

WELCOME CASSI !!!!!!

Welcome new writer.

Umm, I have no idea what this is!

Hey everyone! I'm introducing a new writer *drumroll* dun-dun-dun-dA! My little sister! ALL of this is hers and she is 8 so it's not going to be perfect.

Michelle, Gail and Dewayne's Adventures; Tale Three; Sneaky Michelle

Michelle had a friend named Ena, and they were hanging out in a Wal-Mart parking lot, when one of Ena's friends showed up.

Michelle, Gail and Dewayne's Adventures; Tale Two; Not A Happy Mule

Behind their house, an old man lived in a trailer.

Michelle, Gail and Dewayne's Adventures; Tale One; Bloody Heads

Gail was the youngest and the prettiest, Michelle was a boyish kind of girl and was very tough.

Elly Mae

Cool.

Wishes (poem, well, sort of)

see my cracking lips
they wish for water
hear my unsteady breaths
they wish for more oxygen
smell my perfumed sent
it wishes to be inhaled
touch my shaking hand
it wishes for your own
taste my passionate kiss
it wishes for more infatuation
sense my pounding heart
i wishes for only you.

imagination

You could call this a poem.

Writer's block (sort of a poem, but not really)

I pulled this out of my mind at a completely random moment.

Black and White Roses

"Louise! Louise honey look out!" Whap! Whap! I cried out, "Stop, please stop!!" Three more times and Clark was breathing heavily, "There.

Elly

I made a mistake.

Ellymae

Okay, I did a little digging of my own to try and figure this out, and ere's what I found.

Hope this will suffice

"You shall no longer take things at second or third hand, not look through the eyes of the dead, nor feed on the spectres in books.

POST SOMETHING!!!!

No one has posted anything in about 10 hours, POST SOMETHING PLEASE!!!!.

Barron

Good, i'm glad you're not mad with me, what a releif.

The angel experience - ch.8

Getting rid of my wings wasn’t nearly as painful as growing them.

EllyMae.

I hope you look on here .

feanix - part twenty-five

Myella turned on the young girl standing in the clearing with her.

EllyMae...I'm still waiting!

When will you post the next chapter in "Feanix?"

§-Matthew.

The angel experience - ch.7

I sat on my own in the small room.

Bobbie- Leigh

They're not strange, theyre very good names.

The horrible time in first grade

It was a good year untill the middle,my teacher, Ms.

God's Reach: Chapter six

Chap.

God's Reach: Chapter five

Chap.

God's Reach: Chapter four

Chap.

God's Reach: Chapter three

Chap.

to any one

yes, it is just us posting.

Have you noticed

Have you noticed that it's only Ellymae, Kati, and Shelby posting?

(From Sarah).

EllyMae

Does that mean you like it? I'm almost done with the story, I just have to edit everything before I post it.

Shelby

TYPICAL!!! I just watched a sad tradgedy film and now i'm listening to getto gospel on the computer AND THEN.

God's Reach Chapter two

Chap.

God's Reach

Chap.

The angel experience - ch.6

I opened my eyes, feeling very uncomfortable.

kati and sarah

1) i know soe french, not much, but enough to get me 96% on my exam.

The angel experience - ch.5

So, I’m an angel from heaven who has been sent to save the world… no biggy.

Elements

This is Sarah *and kati* again! Here's the prologue of our story, and I might change it, so don't get confused when you read this twice and this in BOLD isn't here.

The angel experience - ch.4

I took a deep breath, and stepped out of the shadows.

The angel experience - ch.3

I heard someone groan.

Kati and Sarah

WOW!!! i like the sound of your story.

Kati

Thanks.

Lauren

I LOVE it! Very good for when you were 10.

Hi

This is Sarah on Kati's account! We are creating a story on here TOGETHER.

An earlier story (save the tomatoes for something more important)

This is one of the earlier mystery stories I alluded to in my posts.

Shelby

I loved your thunder and fire story.

Shelby

You don't think? Let me tell you I KNOW that isn't the way it works, but you are right.

Kati

I'm glad you liked it.

Kati

Feanix shouldn't be that much longer, and as for the angel experience.

The angel experience - ch.2

Ari and I walked along the path that wound its way through the park, hardly speaking.

Shelby

*sniff sniff* It was soo sad!I just loved the ending of shelley's story! It doesn't exactly work like that, but I remembered this:

There is no greter love than this: that he shall lay down his life for a friend.

EllyMae

How long is Feanix and how lond is your Angel story?.

The angel experience - ch.1

I watched the girls cross the road.

Kati

Kati, I just posted the last chapter and it explains everything, so read it if you want.

Thunder and Fire: Chap.10 Found (last chapter)

They were on their horses now.

Thunder and Fire: Chap.9 East Mountain

Shelley turned her head, "How? How do you find him?" Venus sighed, "I may not be right, but you'll just have to wait and see if I'm right.

Thunder and Fire: Chap.8 Demon Fight

People started walking out on horses from the inside of the volcano and standing on the edge.

Kati

Thanks Kati.

EllyMae

One of the best ways to keep a reader reading to add twists to a story.

Guardians: Chapter Nine

Nine (finally! Sorry it took so long.

Shelby

oooooooooooooooh, your story Thunder and Fire is better than Dead, but not Gone.

Thunder and Fire: Chap.7 Encounter

Shelley woke up and Venus wasn't in the bed he had made.

Thunder and Fire: Chap.6 Empty Camp

Venus lead Shelley to his camp where the others were supposed to be.

Silraen, part four

Chapter Four

Janmere was not at all happy when Rider caught uo with her.

Kati

Thanks.

Thunder and Fire: Chap.5 Venus

They rode for days, with no food or water.

Shelby

Thunder and Fire is great, but its confusing.