Month of July, 2007

Yes, this is NOT good poetry (I'm not very poetic, or poetical, as I like to call it). This is a sample of my random poetry. Feedback is appreciated!

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I love my converse looking shoes

Help!

Ramal Vistavidwaz yawned as he flicked on the bright white fluorescent light. The Crime Scene Investigation lab was the same as always. It showed no mood whatsoever.

Free to do so
For I know so
What my imagination is working on
Is it about a faun
Or wizard
Could it be about a lizard?
Why should I ask
For it isn't a hard task

"Okay camera, notes, good," Casey said. "Ann sit here," Mag said and sat down beside her ready to write. "What were you doing the day the child died?" Casey asked. Ann stared at her for a while.

NOTE: I wrote this shortly after Arya rebuffed Eragon. I don't really hate her, but I was a little upset, so this was a goofy way to vent. Don't read this of your one of those easily offended types.

I want to have a nickname. Ooo, ooo, I know. Call me Yddam.

Revalation
concentration
on this generation's
participation
in the nation
dont call it insubordination
theres no fascination
in aggravation
its just
admiration

Mystery
July 31, 2007
By Shelly Nicole

Looks like a shadowy creature lurking among darkness,
Smells like a burning cinders and broken hearts,
Tastes bland, a taste unknown,

Mel rocketed through the basement door. She fell into Rosalina’s arms, panting like a tired dog. “Vhat is it child?” Rosalina questioned inquiringly.

Please leave your answer this question by leaving a comments.

Which one is worse being hot or being cold?

Author's Nite: For my friend Angel, this would be her words...

All I Ever Wanted Was Love
By Kiowa 7/28/07
For Anegl…

Why does he choose me
To get mad at?

Why does he choose me

Author's Note: Wrote this on the way to the lake...

Far Apart Again
By Kiowa 7/27/07

Traveling away without you again
Seeing wonderful things without you again

Author's Note: I brought my bible to school the other day, not knowing what the people in my class would say as I took it out of my backpack to read. Only one boy, nearest to me, made a comment.

Notes: Two of my new favorite songs, which mean a lot to me.

Lifehouse First Time Lyrics

We're both looking for something
We've been afraid to find
It's easier to be broken

ok this is randem but what do you think poems that you write are mostly; sad or happy? or something else?

I’m all alone,
Drowning in this darkness,
Help me, I’m screaming,
But no one seems to hear me.
I’m all alone,
Drowning in this darkness,
Help me, I’m crying,

Howl of the wind, cry of the wolf,
Shadows tell a lie.
Song of the stars, voice of the child,
Silver moon in the sky.
Hush of the heartbeat, scream of the dark,
Night in midnights eye.

To sing and dance, to dance and play,
To share a smile,
And lead the way.

To sing and dance, to dance and play,
To live and laugh,
We stand and say.

To sing and dance, to dance and play,

note-this is weird, its supposed to be from like a "mean girls" point of view
another note-i dont really like this so tell me what you think

No i can't go,
I've told you already,

Sadness kills us,
Our life undone,
The heavy heart,
Blocks the sun.

Tears are shed,
When smiles drown,
But soon you'll see,
Our reasons frown.

Were the water,
To fill the tear,

note-i wrote this thinking of the holocaust

Hiding in the morning mist,
Waiting to be found,
Dancing in the evening rain,
Dreams turn the world around.

http://www.girlsense.com

Kirsten, Wesley, Malika, and Ellen gulped.
When they'd decided to read Adventuraca with some of the other authors, this kind of adventure was not expected.

Jess and Mint ran down to the center of the sector. Jess could already see her brother tied to his stake. She had never been so proud!

I thought I'll write this and bounce it off of Maddy's new story, sorry Maddy if I upset you, I'll try to take it off immedeatly if you want.

Okay, I was bored, so I did this. Let's sing happy Birthday! He's 27, isn't he suppose to be married to Ginny now or something?

Lesson 2:

Okay, from here on, we start properly. Now I’m going to show you how to correctly pronounce the alphabets of the Indonesian language (Bahasa Indonesia). The tips are in the brackets.

It took them a while to trust Spori.

Jozeph ran a brush through my pile of tangled curls on my head, and I grimaced as he approached another tangle.

Mel eyes danced around the room. Sketches of magical creatures were hung upon the walls.

Melrose turned her tearstained face out the window of the rusty Ford Windstar. She was still devastated from the news of her parents sudden car accident.

Note: I am sorry to all Diary of a Fairy lovers but I had to end this series in a rush. This will be my one and only series I will ever do that.

THIS CHAPTER'S STARS:

Kazel, Olivia, Krishna, Jessie, Michelle

I know some of you might not know who some of the characters are, so just come here for reference.

hermonie= harry potter
Saphira=Eragon
Hippogriff= Knights of Charliegmaine

And we're live!
This is Bill* your trusty anouncer, here to bring you the gruesome gory details of our latest fight!
Rebecca enters the ring, armed with her encing sword.

I know I've already posted this, but I wanted some comments.

Nigeria, Africa- September 23, 1664

Clink…Clank…Clack…Clink…Clank…

Readers:

You get up
Say what
A day
Put best jacket
on
Pull up your boots
And hop into
Your car
You go to
The Cabbage patch
On Pucket lane

You live only one life
You can never try it twice
Live this one real well
Or else you might get sent to hell

Make a big mistake
And you'll take
A deep fall
To a wall
Of Guilt

The title says it all really. About a girl who lives in the 1920's whose name is Emily. Emily has a big imagination, and proves it by doing bizzare things such as Cloroxing a horse.

Emily woke up with a start. She shook her head, trying to wave away that awful dream. I won't remember it by the time we have our flight, she told herself. But it was hard to shake off.

When the three detectives got to the office it was closed. "I wonder why it's closed," Casey began, "Dr. Bedger wanted to meet us here."

I cant really say that this is the thing that changed my life but I can say it did some of it.This is a story of the time that a horse changed my life.This is a true story and if you have any questio

At the Finish

I can feel the end,
just waiting to be written.
I just need to type
what was written in my hand.

It's there,
it's waiting.
Asking to be sent.
It's time for the end.

Dear Diary,

Rain will soon splatter,
on my homely window pane.
Thunder will rumble and clatter,
and I will sleep, peacelfully sane.

Droplets will fall with no direction,
and my body will rise and fall.

Leyloni opened her eyes. She noticed two things - one was a throbbing pain in her stomach, and another was a strange feeling as if somebody or something were watching her.

Is It Time?
July 30, 2007
Michelle Tuyo

All the misfortune seems to align,
And all over streets does hatred climb,
So I ask you is it time?

Is it time to end the war?

Rainbow
July 30, 2007
Michelle Tuyo

Beautiful colors twisting across the sky,
The smell of dew lingering in the among it,
A spectacle made of only air,

Okay, Anna qouting Snape: "Don't KILL ME!", yeah I was bored okay? I'm sorry if I'm upsetting you with the Fiction Face off thing okay? I'm sorry! It'll not be as good as yours though.

Frst lesson:

Sorry so long for the update.
Anyway...
By the way, these songs come from the album: "Revolver" by the Beatles (who ROCK!)

Please comment
Just please comment
tell us what you liked
tell us what you didn't
tell us what to change
tell us what to keep
just please comment

Jess stood over looking Sector 14, the area of the world she had grown up in. Up on this high, high hill, she could almost see over the wall that prevented them falling of the edge.

There is no other way to explain this book except by saying I get a stomach ace if I go to long with out reading it.

Still frozen with astonishment, the bewildered Elly stuttered with fright, “Wha-what d-do we do n-now?” Amber, who was frankly happy with excitement, inspected the creepy finding.

I am me
No one else but me
I am that kid in the back
The one you really lack
I need you,
you need me
for a perfect harmony
We were ment for each other and you didn't know about
ME

A lot of people hate Harry Potter. A lot of people love Harry Potter.

As soon as they were in Dana's room they all started talking at once. Nobody could hear what the other was saying.

"Quiet!" David yelled. He was getting angry again.

I see some of you have already practiced saying some French words, so now we'll do sentences!!!;)

Bonjour, comment allez vous.=Hello, how are you. (baunjour, comont talle voo)

Frankly I am disgusted with the series. I do think people should read them, so they can have their own oppinions, but I highly doubt you will find anything of value in them.

I am going to write some new series. THey wil be:

The Mythical Era, ANcient India, And Sacrifical Colors.

THanks!

The Sexy Six swept through the school hallway with their overdramatic strut. The group of gossiping girls halted in front of two school nerds.

I would like to congratulate Karthik and Maddy for doing so well and being Runner-Ups. Both of you did really well!

Enough said it's on kidpub, by calvin

I would just like to say great job to everybody who entered the Summer Writing Contest!

The sprites all carried pointed, gleaming bronze spears. The leader who had spoken was pointing his at the two fourteen-year-olds almost lazily.
"Leave us alone!" said Leyloni bravely.

"How's Mace?" Mom asks as I pummel through the door, throat aching. She glances up from cutting the celery.
"Good." I mumble. "Where's Dad?"

Please all read my stories and comment. I want to build my stories yet don't know how so constructive critisisim on my latest stuff would rock my world.

hey everybody!!! can you all PLEASe read 'I'm Back" and comment on it pleeeeease!!!!!! i need to know what you think about it!!

thanks!!!!

Welcome to french lesson 1. i'm Old Kirsten.
Let's start wit the basics.
Bonjour= hello (baunjour)
Au revoir=bye (o revoir)
Chat= Cat (sha)
Chien=dog (sheien)
Oiseau= bird (waso)

I'm not trying to be rude but when you guys don't comment my stories I think you guys don't like my stories or my writing. I comment you guys! Why don't you comment me back?

Puffy and white
delicate and bright
Made from water
Why should I bother
They make snow and rain
And it doesn't give you pain
Sleet and hail
Fall into a pail
Clouds are so puffy and white

Hanna climbed up the creaky stairs to the attic. I hope I won't fall, she thought. When she got to the attic there were cobwebs and spiders and an old trunk. "I wonder what's in there...." she said.

Dear Diary,

"Come on Hanna or we won't make it to our appointment!" 12 year old Hanna Gresley's mother called. "Greg, George, Taylor!

Welcome to the Pacific Ocean. Cliffs rise, threating to crumble, but stays in place. The sand in a grayish-tan color that feels as if liquid. When stepping, the sand wraps your feet.

"Look out below!" three voices bellowed from above the neighborhood pool, breaking the Saturday afternoon peace. Following the warning there was three consecutive splashes made by cannonballs.

Are you suffering from P.H.S? Or Post-Hallows Syndrom? That period of time after you finished Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows and you have nothing to read?

THE WAY OF THE WORLD
BY OLIVIA BURNS
Satruday, July 28, 2007

Is it possible to love people, love people you have never met?
To want to catch them when they fall, catch them in a net?

Treasures in the water

I dive deeper and deeper
Into crystal clear blue.
I see a discolored speck in the distance,
What is it… or who?

It is a jewel,
Glistening in the sun’s light,

I made these up but I can't think of a story to go along with them so I'm giving them away. If you use one be sure to mention that I made up the title.

The Cheesy Scout

Ennie Inter

I totally disagree with Olivia. I thought this was a great book, one the best in the Clique series. I totally recommend it if you've read the rest of the series.

"Yip, yip, yip!" Once again my unfailing alarm clock woke me up for school.

The snow lays on the ground like a white sheet,
After it rains, it will turn into sleet.

The snow sparkles in the faint winter sun,
While the children outside play and run.

Jozeph ran a brush through my pile of tangled curls on my head, and I grimaced as he approached another tangle.

Gabby snuck out the door and out of the cheap apartment. She found her bike at the sidewalk, laying on the ground. Picking it up, she quickly rode to her comfy, familiar house.

Dear Diary,

You see, I was just some ordinary eleven year old girl living in the year 2089. I lived in New Jersey, in a pretty small MegaPad.

soon to be written by me and my brother are the following 6 books:

the elementals and the king of the sea.

the elementals and the minatour minister.

I might not be on for a while because either I'm on vacation or I'm having a serious case of WRITER'S BLOCK!

One day 13 year old Casey Drew was watching CSI: Miami in her detective HQ* when the phone rang. "Hello?" she said. "Hi! Is this Casey, Casey Drew?" the woman asked. "Oh, hi Dr. Bedger!

Lies get you into trouble
And it's hard to leave it in rubble
They get bigger and BIGGER
And they trigger
GUILT

But it can be removed
if you say something TRUE!

Nicole will be writing Rosalie's idea now, I have severe writers block. I'll wait until it's gone to write more.

Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows reveals magic darker and more stygian than ever.

Blurry. Everything in front of me was black and blurry. As I opened my eyes for the second time that day, I felt an awful throbbing in my head.

We stared at each other from afar,
As you smile my cheeks turn a deep rose.
We danced around the tree of love,
only to loose each other in the branches.

The mere moments we spent together,

Dear Diary,

Someone grabbed Gabby's head and pulled her up with great force. Screaming, she was thrown back inside the shabby room.

Dave the tiny wave was born in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. His mother Helda supported him. She was a medium size wave.

I am me
No one else but me
I am that kid in the back
The one you really lack
I need you,
you need me
for a perfect harmony
We were ment for each other and you didn't know about
ME

Hi people
I was wondering if you needed help finding some lyrics you know lyrics to your favourite songs .So yeah so post a coment if u need any lyrics, i am an expert.So feel free to ask

to look out the window
and watch
for what seems
your only hope

to feel helplessness
and despair

to feel a part of you is lost
and will never be found

to feel your stomach drop

to smile for someone
to cry for someone
to feel for someone
to love

we used to be three
my friends and me
we used to laugh
and smile
but all the while~
we knew it would
not last
and now all we are
is the past.

he layed there and waited
waited for pain
he slept on the cross
his arms in a strain
no crying or screaming
could you hear
after all he was sent by someone very dear
he waited and waited

I haven't been able to write in a while...anyway I'm back. I know you're happy!

Leyloni had disappeared into the woods without breaking a twig or rustling a bush. Bewildered, Falcon ran after her. "Wait! LEYLONI! Wait up! How are we going to -?"

Gabby sped down the hill on her red, shiny new bike. She had long, dirty blond hair that fell loose onto her shoulders. Her eyes were a beautiful, deep blue, and she was in seventh grade.

These are the houses and their descriptions-

Griffyndor-Brave, Strong-willed
Slytherin- Sly, Clever
Ravenclaw- Intelligent, Capable, Mature
Hufflepuff- Hardworking, loyal, honest

I am a waterfall, rushing down,

I am a princess in a sparkling gown.

I am the ice on trees, sparkling in the faint winter sun,

I am a baby bird, innocent and young.

If I created the world, I'd make sure nobody suffers from hunger,
People with no money wouldn't starve any longer.

Endangered animals would no longer be hunted for their fur,

It is so funny and cool. When I read it, I get soooooooo into it. It's one of those stories where you are almost touching the screen with your nose.

I know someone did this weeks ago, but I still think this is smart. Please, if you have a webkinz answer the following questios (the ones in the parenthises are my answers)