KidPub's Never Ending Story
The Story So Far...
"I AM DARKNESSSSS!!!!" The voice grew much deeper and scarier. "Darkness? I thought Evil was bad enough, but now we've got some lunatic calling himself Darkness?"said Gary. Suddenly Darkness stepped out from the shadows and the sibling gasped. It was their next door neighbor Senkrad, and in his hands he held their weapons. Next to him was Gary's cat, Fuffles. "B-But Fuffles HATES Senkrad- doesn't she?" ASked LIz. Gary shook his head grimly "This is an opposite world, remember? How will we get out of this one?" Liz grinned. "There's a trapdoor in the next room, about where we're standing. All we have to do is open the trapdoor and we'll be in the cellar, safe and sound." She and Gary found the iron ring of the trapdoor and pulled. To their dismay, nothing happened.
--Joanna

 

Darkness laughed evilly. Liz frowned. "I thought he was Darkness. Why's he laughing like Evil?" "Oh sorry" said darkness. Darkness laughed darkly. - _ -
--Joanna

 

"I have closed all the exits in this house!" Darkness said laughing evilly. "You know the woman you just met a few minutes ago?" Darkness asked. "..yes.." Gary answered, "you mean that wizard." "Oh she's no wizard you twit! She's my poor little sis who never ALWAYS gets everything...including the throne." Darkness said evilly.Suddenly, a cold chill shivered the room, and Liz's charm necklace blew off of Darkness's hand and reached Liz's neck. "No! It can't be...NO!" Darkness yelled as a dark beautiful white tornado came behind him and sucked him in. "But you're dea.." Darkness said as the tornado sucked him in.
--Sophia

 

Enter the next paragraph...this is a weird story
--Emily

 

Liz sat there, staring at the death of Darkness. She looked at Gary, who was smiling. "Nice going." he said. She smiled back. Suddenly, a huge crash hit the floor, and everyone looked around. Finallly, they found out the mountain was SHAKING! Uh oh, it wasn't a mountain, it was a... BoOm.
--Jingxioncadusonikun

 

*Emily please post your commetn on Authors notes if you don't mind*
--Ninja Cat

 

Gary and Liz woke up to find a giant butler standing over them. They woke up in beds that were two sizes to small...
--Brendan

 

The butler took a shiny silver tray with a platter of food; gary and liz looked up and saw the evil gleam in his black eyes with red iris.
--Evan

 

"Why hello," The butler said as he burned Gary's arm with his red iris laser.
--Brendan

 

"Oww!" Gary exclaimed. The butler laughed and turned to enter the kitchen. "What was that for?" Liz asked ,standing up. "I dunno... But we're going to find out."
--Halle

 

suddenly gary's book fell out of nowhere. the pages started turning rapiddly and liz realised that it was some sort of guide. just as she came to this conclusion, the pages stopped turning. the book was open at pages 57and 58. at the top of the pages, gary and liz could see the title of the book: a beginners guide to monsters, darklings, and Evil assistants. there was a picture of the butler on page 57 and on page 58 there was information about him. Liz and Gary read on, horrified, as they discovered the threat Evil's assistant posed. to them.Liz was too busy reading to notice that gary had stopped and was rolling around on the floor in weird convulsions. "Hey gary, it says here that the butler's eye laser can posses people with just one burn. Are you feeling all right gary?... Gary?"
--Joanna

 

The butler appeared by the door of the bedroom, a mencing look covering his face in a blanket of horror. "Gary!" Liz yelled. Gary lay on the left side of his bed. he mumbled... "Liz...Help. Please. Page 156. I'm in the World of Death Rays." Liz stared at Gary. "Is he delustional?"
--Halle

 

liz turned to page 156 and saw the small title of the chapter and saw the butler watching her; with sudden shock the butler burned the book with his laser eyes.
--Evan

 

"No!" Liz screamed. Gary was looked horrified as the butler looked at him. "I am Darkness's cousin, Eye Screamer" he said. "I know," Gary answered and looked behind him to see Liz and made motions for her to run. "What do you mean you know?" Eye Screamer asked. Gary saw Liz running away and out the door. The butler (Eye Screamer), and Gary heard a loud slam on the giant door. The butler started to run after her, and Gary looked out the window to see his sister run. Then he ran too. Gary was horrified about his sister. Where would they go now? And how would they get away from the butler?
--Katie

 

Gary and Liz awoke once again and figured out it was all a dream.
--Brendan

 

except one thing was different. gary's book had a scorch mark on the back of it.
--scotwriter

 

The scorch mark looked like it had been made with a knive. Gary wondered who had done it . Then he looked up, and, to his disgrase, saw the butler, looking straight at him with his laser eyes. And just like that, Gary was under his control.......FOREVER.
--Amelia

 

then, he found out who did it because the butler had a knife.
--Anna

 

He tried to fight the butler's control over him, but it was pointless. He started to panic, and he tried to scream. But the butler wouldn't let him. What was going on?
--HannahBanana

 

Gary struggled under the menacing eyes of the butler; with all his might he realesed a power that he never knew he had, he spread hes arms wide and a birst of red light and the butler was soon cowering in the far corner of the room.
--Evan

 

Gary then searched the room for his beloved sister, Liz , but she was nowhere to be seen. He cried out in despair for he feared that while he was under the control of the butler, something horrible had happened to her. Suddenly, a memory flashed in his head of his sister sneaking out while he was breaking free of the butler`s control. Garry was happy that his sister had escaped, even if it was only for a little while and, for the first time in what seemed like ages, Garry felt hope.
--JuliAnne

 

But then Gary began to wonder how he had made that red light and made the butler cower in fear. What was wrong with him? Was this good or bad? Could Liz do something too? He looked at the butler, but he had dissapered. Gary tried to make the red light again, but he couldn't. He went to find Liz.
--HannahBanana

 

He found Liz, and she had found a new pet. He was a bat, and sat on her shoulder. And he was really nice to Gary.
--dragonwriter

 

Garry reached out a shaky hand to pet the bat but, before he could, the bat screeched and bit at him. Garry wondered why and when he looked at the bat again he noticed a little bit of singed hair. Garry gasped in horror as he realized he had all of the powers of the villans he had battled plus many extra.
--JuliAnne

 

*oh boy...yet another villain...-_- I mean even me, who loves villains, is kinda getting inundated with them. They have no friends?*
--Mouth of Sauron

 

All of the sudden the bat gave a loud screach! And then all of the villains came from the whole story, Evil, Darkness, the pancake monster, Eye Screamer, everyone! Gary was horrrified. "Liz, where did you get this bat?" he asked quickly. "Down by the cave!" she answered with a scared voise. "He was nice at first!" Liz and Gary were so horrified. The villains got closer. "We meet again," said Eye Screamer. "Liz run!" shouted Gary. Gary held on to the book as tight as he could, and he and Liz ran as fast as they could.
--Katie

 

Down and down deeper into the cave they went Liz sweated with worry as they ran on>
--Kathryn

 

Deeper and deeper they went until they came to a hairpin turn and ended up, with eye screamer standing right before them. "Now where do you think you're going?" eye screamer said in a calm, palid voice.
--Evan

 

Liz was terrified, more terrified than ever before. She and Gary were completely surrounded by all of their enemies! What could they possibly do to free themselves? Nothing, Liz thought, we can't get out of here. Liz was so scared that she closed her eyes tight and squeezed her brother's hand, Gary, also terrified, squeezed his sister's hand as well. He also shut his eyes tight. And in both their minds, they only had one thought: Someone please get us out of here! Suddenly, Liz's necklace started to shimmer. Gary and Liz still held hands, but they opened their eyes, and were surprised to see this. Even all their foes were intimidated, and slowly started to back away. Now Liz's necklace was starting to glow even brighter and brighter, until it shone so bright everyone had to avert their eyes. Suddenly, in just one second, there was a flash of light so bright everyone had to close their eyes. When the villians opened their eyes, they saw that Gary and Liz were gone.
--Sindu

 

When the villains saw that they were gone, they were very angry. But went back to where they came from. Liz and Gary were breathing heavily from what had just happened. They fell to the ground. Remembering all that had just happened, they started to think about Kustria and Liffen. "Where were Kustria and Liffen?" Gary thought. Just then, Liz heard a sound, it was from a long didstance away, and was calling their names. Gary and Liz were frightened at first, but then recognizied the voises. It was Liffen's voice! They ran in the dirrection of the voice. Once they got there, they were both out of breath. Gary looked up. "What? This doesn't make sence," Gary said suprised that there was no Kustia or Liffen. They heard the voice again, this time, it was farther away. "What is going on here?" Liz asked. "I'm not sure, but we better find out," Gary answered. They kept travaling, then the voise became quite clear. "Over here!" shouted Liz. Nobody came.
--Katie

 

Suddenly, a huge feeling swept over Liz. Huh? She felt stronger, stronger, stronger, then, BOOM! She gasped. She had... no, Gary!
--Jingxioncadusonikun

 

"Help...us...!...help....us....!" A sound croaked from the distance, Liz could hear it, but did not know where it came from. Her necklace pulled her to where Liz didn't know. When her necklace stopped pulling her, she was face-to-face with all three, but all three was a mirror! Liz didn't know what to do. Suddenly, something bright shown behind her....it was the puppetmaster! "DAD!" Liz cried.
--Sophia

 

Once Liz got to him, she ran up to hug him. "Ahhhhhh!" Liz screamed when she found out it wasn't really him but just a hollogram. It was a trap! Under the hollogram there was a trap door and she fell in it. Liz kept falling and fallining, she began to cry. Liz thought that she was with her dad and safe. She hit the ground with a loud slam! Liz cried from because of her fall. Once she looked up, she saw her dad, and made sure he wasn't just a hollogram. She ran up to him. "Dad! What's going on?" Liz asked. Once Liz looked around, she realizied she was in the cave once again. "I'm not sure, but we have to get out of here. Where's Gary?" He asked. "I'm not sure and I don't know what's going on, but I want Gary, and Kustria, and Liffen, and...home," Liz said, still crying. Once she finnaly stopped crying Liz's dad asked her a question. "How did you get down here?" Liz's dad asked. "I saw a hollogram of you, and I ran to you thinking it was you and I fell through a trap door," Liz answered. She started to feel stronger again, and stronger, then she made the red light Gary had made earlier on. She hugged her dad and wondered where they would go this time.
--Katie

 

Though veary sad and homesick, Liz soon fell into a gentle relaxing sleep.
--JuliAnne

 

Liz then woke up from her sleep. She looked around and found herself in the same cave she was in a while ago, when that strange explosion occured. And she saw Gary, Kustria, and Liffen. It had all been just a dream! She thought. But as she got up off the ground, she noticed there was someone far away, approaching them. Liz squinted to see who it was. Then she recognized the figure. It was the Puppetmaster.
--Sindu

 

who is this puppetmaster anyway?
--Thomas

 

*The Puppetmaster was a character from earlier in the story.* "Dad!" Liz called out. Gary, Liffen, and Kustria turned to see the Puppetmaster approaching them. Liffen and Kustria stood gaping. "Dad?!" They both said. "Yes, he's our father." Gary said. Liffen and Kustria exchanged serious looks. "So you're the Puppetmaster's children." Liffen muttered. "Yes..." Liz said. Why were Liffen and Kustria acting so strange? "So you were on the dark side this whole time!" Kustria said. Gary and Liz were taken aback. That was why they were acting so strange! They still believed the Puppetmaster was evil, and now they thought Gary and Liz were evil, too! "No, you guys don't understa--" Gary began. "That's it! We're not going on with you." Liffen yelled. "Yeah, goodbye!" Kustria added. "No! Please, wait!" Liz called out. But Liffen and Kustria were already walking away, and they didn't even look back.
--Sindu

 

I like how every time an author doesn't like what another author said, they just make it a dream. Haha
--dragonwriter

 

Kustria and Liffen walked into a room with weird blinking lights. Suddenly, the door behind them shuts automatically! Kustria examined the lights. "Luckily, Gary and Liz are still, in hearing distance, if we shout loud enough, unluckily, these lights are bombs!"
--Thomas

 

Then came the flaming Puppies. They wanted to kill everyone.
--Carson

 

FLAMING PUPPIES? HOW IN THE WORLD DID YOU COME UP WITH THAT IDEA? OR SHOULD I SAY, "STUPID IDEA!!!" Gary, Liz puppetmaster, were seperated from everyone! SO WHERE IN THE WORLD IS THOSE STUPID PUPPIES? NOT TRYING TO CREATE A FIGHT, BUT IF YOU DELETE THAT STUPID IDEA OFF THE CHART, I MIGHT DELETE THIS ONE! DO YOU EVEN NOW WAHT NES IS?
--Thomas

 

That was rude, Thomas......
--dragonwriter

 

And the flaming puppies took Gary and Liz and put them in a dungeon to be questioned
--dragonwriter

 

Thomas is perfectly justified. You don't have the Puppetmaster, lord of darkness and enslaver of minds, in the same story with flaming puppies. It's not done. Not if you want a good story.
--Mouth of Sauron

 

Dragonwriter, take your second paragraph off, that was unnecessary. Leaving Liffen and Kustria in the bomb room like that? And very nice comment mr. Mouth of Sauron
--Thomas

 

Everyone has a right to write! So don't start a fight!
--Lucky

 

I know, but if Liffen and Kustria are forced to suffer in a bomb room, I guess you people don't have imagination, just imagine them being stuck in a bomb room, with Gary and Liz just in hearing distance, and you right down that out of nowhere flaming puppies who wanted to kill everyone came. BAH! Oh, and if all of a sudden, the Puppies who wanted to kill everyone decides to spare Gary & Liz's life, what do you think is to happen with Kus and Lif. I am not going to allow them to die, but if they somehow break through, they are not going to forgive Gary and Liz, so that is the reason why I am not happy with it
--Thomas

 

DUDE! THOMAS! JUST LET IT GO!!!! Can't you guys just have fun? Do have to insult each other and boss each other around? It isn't like this is going to get published or anything, anyway, so just let it go!
--dragonwriter

 

Sorry, I forgot, the NES is for everyone, I'll just let it go
--Thomas

 

"The bombs are about to blow!" shouts Liffen, "GARY! LIZ! HELP!" but it was too late, the bombs started to beep extremely fast, and BOOM! "Is this what it feels like to be dead?" asked Liffen, "With green jello all around you?"
--Thomas

 

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