Ice On The Windshield (It's not done yet)

by Elysia
in oz

Sick of trying
I can't show hesitation
They're all dying
It's not just
My imagination

I wish I was dreaming
A simple story of love and death
But why am I crying
When I wake up
Stiff in my head

All hope
Is lost
'Cause I know
This ain't a dream
No pure fiction

It's all real
Can't decide
Hard to deal
Don't pressure me
Or try to lie


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i think this might be about what i've been hearing

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I dunno what to comment on if it is not finished yet--- but for now it is really good.

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