in Minnesota
January 18th, 2002
It was another day in planet Zaccer and Al was sitting on his mega-sofa drinking a soda. It has been a while since he had a real case. "Man it's been really boring," said Al to his pet Freddy, "I don't get to do anything anymore. Not even destroy a bug." Today was Al's birthday but he didn't want to celebrate. He had been in his sofa for one month. Everyone tried hard to him up but nothing worked.
Meanwhile in the planet Vanempor a villain named Billy Pinker Stinker was released from jail. He took a citizen hostage and forced him to drive to planet Zaccer. Al didn't know any of this until his butler finally gave him the warning. After his butler explained this, Al began to put on a smile. "I can't exactly understand your story" said Al, "but I'll do it anyway."
The next twenty-four hours Al was getting everything he could find that could help him. He also charged up the Aloes just in case. After he got that done he went straight to the city where he could find more information on the creature. When he got to the special research area, he went straight to his computer were a scientist was waiting. "Good you're finally here," said the scientist, "I've been doing what you said. I've been looking through his history and you won't believe what's in here!" The scientist handed Al the papers. "Hummmmm," said Al, "I think this will be good enough, Thanks!" Al thanked the scientist and went on his way. As Al began searching for the vicious villain he noticed clues. One of them was broken mouthwash bottle. "Aha!" said Al, "According to this information he hates any sort of teeth cleaner." Al quickly ran to the store and got a mega-brush and a full jug of mouthwash. As he went on his way again he smelled something mysterious.
"Yuck!!!!" Al said shaking his head in disgust, "What a horrible smell!" And then he noticed something else, a funny creature that he saw at the corner of his eye. The creature was going to torture his victim with his horrifying breath. Then Al put on a triumphant but serious face and said, "Put him down!" The creature slowly turned his head in shock. "That's right I'm talking to you!" All of a sudden the creature dropped the man and dove right at Al!
He grabbed Al and spread his horrible breath on Al. "YUCKY, YUCKY, YUCKY,YUCKY!!!!!!" screamed Al. Al took action with his mouthwash gun. He sprayed the creature three times and then he noticed something. There was a wire on the creature and it was dying and then all of a sudden he heard the word... "SURPRISE!!" Huh?? said Al in confusion as he turned around. He saw his butler and citizens of Zaccer. Al blushed at the fact that he was set up. "Why did you this and who got this idea? asked Al. "It was my idea.," said the butler, "We did this so you would come out." "Well you fooled me." After a while of explaining they all went out for a party. From then on Al never complained of anything.
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