The Arthrax system

"Hello" said a voice from Marko's laptop. "What"? yelped Marko. Marko leaned to trun off his laptop. "Please I can show you the ways of the true world" said the voice. "You-your not re-real" said Marko. "Maybe not this laptop, but I am" said the voice. "I will not come to a corny freak-party" said Marko. "Then you leave me no choice" said the voice. Marko felt like his was being transfered like a file to another computer. He suddenly found himself laying in a 3-d world where the grid showed clearly. There was another man in a black suit sitting there. "Hello Marko" said the man. "Ho-how do I know your name? the man cut in. "You no-everything your about to say-the man cut in again. "Then theres-no use speaking-the man cut in a third time. "Gosh" said Marko. The man stepped up to Marko. "My name is Oel and I can teach you things beyond the mind" said the man. "A-" stuttered Marko. "Now go back to your world" said Oel. Marko felt like he was being transfered back, and poof he was down in his dining room. "Everyone I saw a world in a computer" Marko frantically explianed. His mom and dad rolled their eyes. "I did" moaned Marko. "Pack your bags we're going on vacation" said Marko's Dad. It was a long drive. Soon they came to a stop at the CMPI crazy-maniacal-persons-institute. "Dad why we stopping here" asked Marko. Two men came out and grabbed Marko pulling him from the car. As Marko was being carried in the intitue he said to his dad, "why"?. His dad replied with, "We never could have a son who is a maniac".......

It's a working novel. see the next parts. soon.